To much bashing... not enough plot, i don't even understand the need of character bashing that many fanfic author seems to like to write, from my perspective you guys have no respect to the original creator of the manga, the way you bashing the character is the same like you spit in Kishimoto face.
Huh...whatever... not like you gonna respond to this critics anyway.

I aint gona lie. This chapter and the one previous infected me with all types of feels! Damm that was emotional.

lol I kinda feel bad for Kiba. Poor guy kinds got dumped onto a team where not one of them wanted him there through no fault of his own. hopefully, he'll do better on the new team!

Man just f*ck you Hiashi!

Okay, the mystery dude is:
1) Obito
2) Hashirama
3) Minato
4) Jiraiya
or
5) An OC
That's all I've got...

Naruto is starting to have a lot of problems in his head, he has the kyubbi, a dark side, and a females voice. Are there like children in there too? Or is there like a whole other group of people in his mind he doesnt know about?. Your story was starting off good even a little towards the middle, but its starting to become a whole roller coaster that its not keeping my attention. Goodluck with your story

What will happen next time

If this Naruto isn't already at the top tier Genin or already chunin then you're doing something wrong

I swear to god I will find you and I will fucking kill you if you fuck your story by going all daisies and sunshine on us with this retarded team bonding during missions
There's is literally no way for Naruto to get along with Sasuke and Sakura so I hope to god or whatever deity there is out there that I can read this and not fucking throw up and rage

My god this is so fucking retarded how they could fucking remove a person from a fully functioning team just cause of advice from a lazy depressed jonin who has never taught shit

Hopefully he'll get shadow clones and start working hard with those aswell soon

Grammar. It exists.

You have ruined any enjoyment I got from the first part of this story. Author is an idiot. No respect for people who torpedo their own work. You made plot decisions that shouldn’t have been made. Because they don’t make sense. You forced this story down a stupid path. Fucking idiot.

I don’t mind that you used the seal asshole. What I mind is your fucking stupid and retarded ass decision to not punish Neji for cheating. He deserved disqualification. Every single person saw this so there is no excuse for letting it slide. Moron authors just expect the readers to swallow their stupidity. Fuck you moron!

Twists thrown in JUST for the sake of having a twist shows what a poor writer you are. There must becreasons or your story is pointless. You are retarded.