fuck you to the moon for Japaneses words you can go die in a fire

Oh man, really? This whole story until now is just lots of bullshit! Can't just get straight to the point? I want to see OP action! Not need for crap talking. One thing I understand from the view of naruto world is that, his world is full of hypocrite idiots.

Your timeline is confusing didn't Naruto return to Konoha before Academy graduation?

Why the fuck are people so triggered here? Going to a review page to insult the author instead of simply saying what you don't like. The fuck is a white knight?What's with the kill yourself comments? We get that you're a triggered feminist but really? You insult the author and go on to insult the person who defends the author. Personally, I can't say I like this story much. The banishment, bad guy kakashi, coming back to konoha looking sexy when he shouldn't have come back at all and all that turned me off so much I couldn't go past chapter 5. I'm sorry

I know its your story and you can do anything with it but if i was Sarutobi then i would not let him go like that. Look he is barely 6 yo and he just said ti leave village and thats all.

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even tho they got together and story is completed why the hell did you make it into hurt/angst for? like dude ITS not always the dude who should confess if you believe in the bullshit then your dummer then you think it goes both ways not one way. Another thing you made naruto out to be the bad guy yes he should of went for the plunge cause its always better to get rejected then always living with that *what if* in our head, plus im just sick of seeing authors write naruto as a hardcore dense person like can you blame the kid in canon? no cause he doesnt even know what love is in till literally after the story was over with, and if you believe his "love" for sakura was actual love? that wasn't love that was need for attention. after reading this chapter im out to much of an angst naruto and also another problem if your gonna write naruto as a godlike don't make him hide ALL his strength hell whats the point of all that power if you can't use it? i know pointless thats why you rarely see godlike fanfictions cause all they are about is sex, one shotting bitches, and more sex thats it

Why the fuck are they switching from English to Japanese. Just have them say sorry instead of Gomen, it’s like a unnecessary conundrum

Why the rape scene? Simple beatings would suffice right?!

So many characters are such hypocrites, I can understand Kushina being in a state of depression but she would love naruto and recognize him as her son. She was a Jinchuuriki herself so she knows what it feels like. She is far to loyal to Minato to simply move on that quickly and have kids with another man. Really just don’t like the drawn out drama

I was actually enjoying this story, until this chapter atleast. He has the Thunder God technique. which can be put on people permanently yet he hasn't put a marker on to Hana? it makes no sense. This entire chapter felt so forced that its freaking stupid. Then when you try to do a rampage scene; he targets the small fry? instead of going after the one that set him off? makes no sense at all. I'm going to finish this chapter but honestly I think I'm done with this one.

Hey Slytherinsister21, shut your bitch ass up. Fucking pansy puffs like yourself are the reason why dickhead authors feel entitled to only good opinions and compliment, and loose their shit when any criticism or dislike comes their way.

How the fuck can anyone improve when anyone is kissing their ass? So yes, kill yourself. Seriously, Slytherinsister21, you sit the fuck down. Or better yet, tell your two cent whore of a mother stop sitting on a hobo's meat for thrills. Don't act like some moral bullshit monitor, and hop off. You don't like what I say, then get the fuck over yourself.

Nobody gives a flying fuck what you or me says. You want to take what anyone says to anyone on the internet to heart, then boo fuckity hoo to you. I find that shit hilarious.

Bonus: Go. Kill. Yourself.

AWWWWWW

Thanks for the chapter

Rather heartbreaking chapter, thanks for the chapter though