Sorry pal but the human path can pull souls out

Maybe instead of blaming rightful critics, you grow up and learn to write without sounding like an edge lord, retarded eleven year old? Ever thought of that, you brain dead monkey? Get fucked, bitch.

Fuck aboma

It is a very good story, I hope to read more great stories, bye!

Please tell me Sakura gets a redemption arc.

Joder Estaba Gustandome la Historia y Entonces Agregas Puta de Hinata ala lista del Harén. Onesta mente no entiendo cual es el Jodido punto de Emparejarla Con Naruto, Es Sólo Una Inútil Acosadora Junto Con la Perra de La Haruno Deberían Morirse ambas Junto Con El Puto Sasuke. Como sea No se Guire leyendo esta Basura y Espero Que Más Nadie lee a esta Muerda.

PD; Jodete

Fuck you nigger.

Alv.

I've gotta say, 2 friends of mine and I turned this fic into a challenge to see how far we could bring ourselves to get through this story; we wound up turning it into a drinking game everytime a 12 year old cringey edge lord moment happened. Haven't laughed so hard at something or gotten that drunk in a while, so thanks for actually writing this as if it's a self insert from a wet dream by a hot topic obsessed middle schooler

First it was Naruto Sparda and getting revenge just for his fathers murder. Now its Sparda Namikaze Naruto reinforcing that he doesnt give a shit about his mom in the slightest.

What the hell is that ending? He just randomly gets assigned an A rank with no experience in the field as a fresh genin and without his team?

No one else in the room to go with him including Kakashi?

Also how the hell would an influential figure be gone for 3 months before people are sent after them? Which is what this sounds like with the lack of saying there have been searches. Even then a tracking ninja would've been an obvious request long before 3 months.

Shed easily be dead or pregnant and broken by now.

Upset that his father was killed but no comment in his mom. Okay then.

So.. nothing from Kushina? Guess I'll see next chapter.

Ive been reading for a while and I don't remember when the last review I put was but so far I really like the story and the concept. The jak incorporation was cool, I remembered it from when I was a kid as it was something cool to see. I like your fight scenes and then only seem to get better as the story continues. I really do hope to see this story continue for a long time to come.

Lightning is no stronger than water, elements in naruto does not work like that...

firewindlightningearthwaterfire

thats the element wheel in naruto, as you see earth works is stronger than water

yes lightning beats earth but does not mean that it is stronger than water, on the contrary lightning is a good combination with water