omg it's gonna be a free for all isn't it? Oh noooooo this is going to be brutal and unexpected for everyone involved. All these people are going to come out of the woodwork as competition no one else had even considered and it's going to be all out war.

Poor, poor Sakura.

But happy, happy me.

I love how you take time developing each character in turn. We get these nice slow glances into their perspectives and it adds so much depth and richness to the story. You're good at writing complex multidimensional characters - and that makes the plot less black and white, which is refreshing.

Kakashi! Save the day! I desperately want Sakura to be happy and Sasuke to be miserable and regret his choice for the rest of his life. Hinata deserves better too (assuming she wasn't aware of what was going on with Sakura). I am pacing and squealing in anticipation to see how this all works out in the end. I'm so excited!

AHGLSIUBNSKJBNSFBJN SASUKE YOU MOTHERFUCKER

shwoooooooooooo okay okay okay I'm calm, I'm calm, deep breaths, hooooooo motherFUCKER - calm, calm

I don't know if I've ever been enraged so quickly. My hands are honestly shaking in rage right now, I'm making so many typos. This is amazing! I am beyond invested in this story now. It is a rare gift to trap a reader so quickly with a premise, let alone to get them emotionally hooked on a story this early on - you have a rare gift my friend. I have mountains of homework to do and I know I shouldn't put it off, but every bit of me is itching to binge this fic to resolve the tension I have right now. I'm going to be obsessed with this until finals are done. I have the feeling this fic will be the perfect catharsis I need for all my stress right now. Thank you so much for sharing!

Sakura seems a bit... Easy...
But yay Kakashi!

Wow. You wrote this really ...raw. I felt the fear of Sakura waking up like that. Yamoto is a stranger omg. He was suddenly not attractive, even without the wooden puppet similarities. You write well.
Sasuke would be totally pissed off Sakura messed up his future. And he would have almost killed her for it . I actually ship SasuHina so it was a little hard to accept the canon of NaruHina but it does ring true what to dooo
Oh hey Kakashi, yeah Sakura, btw, i Like you more. Like, THIS. Muuuah!
Hehe!

Kakashi was SO close to confessing!
Lol I knew the exploding tags were duds too. So funny!
Omg sakura is ovulating or something she is too horny

But you make me like Yamoto!

Drunk on orange juice, LOL
Omg the oppressive heat! Very well written!
She kissed Kakashis cheek omg

i liked her attraction to Yamoto!
Lol Kakashi just plain as day saying Stay away

Kakashi Is just adorabley in love
Lol Sai!

Aw Naruto! Nice chapter!
And hi Hinata

Oooh very nice

Dang. How she could unconsciously feel what was really going on was written very well. Their physical relationship was also written well... She called it love making and he said screwing. Lovely.
Poor sakura.
But sorry this should have really happened in canon.

Amazing story 3