| Reviews for The Cave |
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   rebecca-in-blue chapter 1 . 8/1 Although I'm not sure that I can see Katniss and Peeta going this far in the cave, I think you make a well-written case for it here. I like how Katniss is almost equal parts nerves, confusion, and want in the beginning and her embarrassment when Peeta wakes up and catches her. I also like that he's so attuned throughout to how it feels for her. P.S. Congrats! You have one of the most reviewed fics in this fandom, and I'll be sharing it at my forum. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/17 I love this! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/2 Absolutely love! I always felt like the time in the cave was a little wasted and liked to imagine a scene like this |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/17 Ah authors notes, the kind, generous messages left on the end off stories always full of delight! XD anyway ur story was amazing I have no problem with it well done! |
| Jeffdacat chapter 1 . 4/18 Hi I’m Jeff a cat (not really duh) I love ur story it’s amazing and reference to the authors note with the unkind criticism I would do the same! |
| emily russell chapter 1 . 3/16 It's so good. Peeta and Katniss are make for each other, good job and keep up the amazing work. |
| C chapter 1 . 2/15 they were on CAMERA |
| JHsgf82 chapter 1 . 8/29/2019 I must say, it was quite good, and I enjoyed it. Although, it was hard to believe they'd do this in front of the cameras. I understand Katniss thinking they'll probably die, so I guess looking at it that way, I could possibly see it. At least the sleeping bag shielded them from sight some, so I could see some touching happening underneath. But yeah, hope Prim and Mrs. Everdeen aren't too traumatized. Don't look, you two! Or Gale, haha. But I really liked the whispering thing, and Peeta was cute about it. Man, the love and sweetheart thing! Well, the boy's dream was coming true, so I'm sure he was gushing, lol. Anyway, really sweet. Was nice to see Katniss being decisive and realizing her feelings for Peeta early on. Thanks! |
| Leafynoyay chapter 1 . 10/7/2018 vary nice |
| LACR chapter 1 . 8/16/2018 Great story, I like that Katniss was the one to initiate their intimacy. I would love to know what Peeta was thinking. I'm sure at first he was thinking he must be dreaming. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2018 Best erotic fan fiction I’ve read. Beautifully written, and full of lust. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/26/2018 THIS WAS AMAZING. I loved that they both asked for consent, it honestly made it so much better. The writing was amazing, as well! Best lemon I’ve read in a along time! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2018 Nicely done |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/2/2018 um |
| Wolf girl chapter 1 . 11/4/2017 I wish this happens in the books |
