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Indigo2004 chapter 7 . 4/23
oooh this was awesome! I should've been doing work while I was reading this but I really liked it. I love how Kakashi and sakura are both from the future- hopefully they'll be able to spend more time together and try to figure out what went wrong in the other timeline
either way thanks for the ride
Its been super fun so far! :D I hope you get to update (even though oh wait shit its been over a decade hahahaa)
~dig
diecupcakes chapter 7 . 3/20
Author-sama,
I was just on my merry way, peacefully reading your fic, and decided to review it before heading to the next chapter. You know, doing the deed so many authors always want us readers to do - I was finally doing it. And then...I noticed this horrible thing - there was no next chapter! And, to make things worse, it has been five years since you've last updated. FIVE YEARS. If you'll excuse me, I'm going to go cry in a corner.
First of all, this is a wonderful story! I love the characterization, no, I love everything! It's a relief to have a break from the horribly, mindnumbingly same canon I read in every time travel fic.
And for the record, I tried reading How Long is Forever. It has a great premise. Good writing, too. But it's dreadfully boring. I just can't get interested. Too little conflict, I guess, or not plotted right, I dunno. But it pales in comparison to your fic. When I read your fic, I'm interested. I want to read more. I want to know more. I want to read more team seven moments, or secret glances shared between Kakashi and Sakura. I genuinely enjoy reading it. And that's how reading something should be - genuinely enjoyable. Not like that other fic, where Sakura just goes on her merry way, making ripples in the timeline, shaking characters, and adults just write her off as a genius, and things are just great, with her winning every 'conflict' and remaining victorious! Yay! No. No 'yay'. I hate that. It's bloody boring.
So, please. I don't know what you're dealing with. I don't know the problems you're facing. I don't know your life. But, please. Please, please consider writing the rest of this gem of a fanfiction. I'm begging you.
Remember, you are an amazing human being. Don't let anyone or anything let you down.
Keep writing (even if it's not this fic, keep writing),
-Diecupcakes
The Naruto Fandom believes in you, so all you need to do is believe in yourself. Believe it!
Ilikeoldfandoms7 chapter 1 . 3/12
Update if you can please uwu
Dango and Tea chapter 7 . 4/26/2019
What? She was armed of knowledge from her past/world and she was incapitated? Plus Sakura's a medic. She can flash out that poison.
AnimeEverywhere chapter 7 . 12/15/2018
I'm quite curious about the whole past-timline, where Sakura & Kakashi (&SAI?) came from... we know something went wrong while fighting Pein, but what exactly i wonder. It seems that Kakashi died some time before the attack though... The whole present-timeline is not bad either tought :) one of my favorite scene is the fight-scene between Sakura & Kakashi *~* That was incredibly hearttouching with a lot of action & mind blowing relevations all at once! Especially well-written fight scenes as well! Great job!
There were small scenes that kinda bored me to read though... like the one where Sakura dragged Naruto to her house to pack & then to his... that wasn't really necessary in my opinion... Or i might just didn't look underneath the underneath *cough*... Another point is her bemothering them... I mean, yes, she's 22 soul-wise & yes they are her cute little 12-year-old teammates/best friends/family but it would have been better with less bemothering scenes (again only my opinion). Still you did say Sakura's getting kinda OOC (more like she's turning into your version of Sakura for this story), so i'll just have to accept with how it goes :)
What did irk me to no end though, was the fact that Sasuke seemed to let Sakura taking the lead, which is (for me) so OOC, that i had to point it out. You did positively surprise me though with this chapter! That's ow he'd behave, yes! Really this scene is my second favorite one, just behind Kakashi-Sakura-fight xD
I really hope you're not taking it personally, that's really just my opinion & i do still want to read this interesting story (if you somehow decide to continue it) :) Otherwise i wouldn't have left a review ;) So thanks for these chapters so far! I'll wait patiently for the next one!
Bye~ AnimeEverywhere
Sandy Spade chapter 3 . 12/14/2018
I am looking forward to the story.
But your thoughts about Sakura are too extreme. She is not a person who vents the grievances to Naruto. Maybe you should try to read the comics. TV always tries to discredit the girl and make her look rude.
Looking forward to your follow-up story.
alonemachine chapter 7 . 10/6/2018
That is actually my favorite kind of time-travel fics. Of course, it has been 3 years or something already, but I think I’ll still be hoping for continuation. Thanks for a great read.
KindredSouI chapter 7 . 9/10/2018
Hope to read more soon!
The Cat's Paw chapter 7 . 8/22/2018
This is a great story that I hope updates again. :)
potstickers4lyfe chapter 7 . 6/16/2018
Please don’t drop this! You can’t leave us with a cliffhanger! Cliffhangers should be illegal ;-;
potstickers4lyfe chapter 6 . 6/16/2018
I love this. I can’t stop grinning and smiling like an idiot when reading in public. Please don’t drop!
Cycle0fthePhoenix chapter 7 . 6/13/2018
oh no, its over already? And just as we got to a canon twist! Oh well, hopefully this mission will teach Sasuke a lesson that doesn't push him to join, how did you put it? A reptilian pedophile?
Cycle0fthePhoenix chapter 5 . 6/13/2018
Hmm, although it seems a little sudden for Kakashi to go into the kill like that. With his hobbies he would brush off her until she did something really out of hand because a) he doesn't know her, hasn't tried to know her, has only made assumptions and b) Sakura has barely done anything out of the ordinary. But I digress, I still enjoy reading this story.
Cycle0fthePhoenix chapter 1 . 6/13/2018
Oh she'll get her precious Sasuke memory/dream - where he puts a chidori in her heart.
Guest chapter 7 . 5/3/2018
I cri.
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