Excelente ...muchas gracias por tu historia . Me encantó.

Saludos desde México 11 julio 2020

This has been a very interesting story. Thank you for writing it.

I absolutely love this story, it's honestly now my favourite Harry/Lucius fic and I can't wait to start reading the sequel

I like it
Thanks

Great story

Thank you for this story ! ! !

im not one to ship male on male or drarry but im not to picky. now lucius and harry what? okay did not see that coming yes it in the summery but now you have piked my curosity

Interesting but why would Lily do this? She didnt say her reasons outloud.
And if Snape is Harrys father, can Harry still be the child of the prophecy?

Had to suspend belief a bit, but really a sweet story. Would love to read a sequel!

I had hoped for some Ron drama over Quidditch - and a little on how the new team was doing without a Potter.

How will they explain how Christopher is Quidditch captain, when he is new? How will they explain how he is on the team as seeker? Won't his moves on his Firebolt be recognized? Why would he HAVE to be in Gryffindor?

I would have liked to have heard that story and seen the reactions of those present. smirk

I know you've already completed this, but I think that Harry should change his first name. Perhaps one of the many 'Harry-like' names...Harrison, Hadrian, Hadrick. It would be too coincidental for a new Harry to arrive when old Harry doesn't.

Why would Dumbledore reinstate Harry on the Quidditch team? Sure, he could overturn the ban, but why would a virtual stranger (which is what Harry is going in as a new person) be captain of the quidditch team?

love it!