Omg i looove this story i hope youupdatesoon c: pfft use them for smores ;) always a nice treat ;D here ill even give you the gram crackers and hersheys and colorful marshmellows *ç*yummmmm oh jebus tht stuff yummy and so is this story ;]

I love it already, I shall wait another two years if there is more to come :) I'm hoping so!

I like this fanfic...please update soon.
Jack and will are so awesome

I am really enjoying this story! Please update it soon.

Your story is my first ever Jack and Will slash fic and i absolutely loved it. Don't listen to people who hate your story. I think it's amazing. I can't wait for chapter 3!

Who could flame this story? D: I love it! So cute I can't wait to see what becomes of Will and Jack, and of Will and Elizabeth as well! I hope not to have to wait for two years though ;) Haha, anyways, I love this story! Thank you for writing it! 3

Love the Jack and Will pairing...can't wait to read how this goes on...

I really hope you continue this! Screw anyone who posted mean reviews. If they don't like it, they don't have to read it. Every great author has their critics. Please keep writing! I love this story! Finish it? Please?

hmm... what is he up too?

I do like this story, however it did confuse me a little with how you asked for both praise and criticism in your first chapter, yet as soon as you recieved some constructive criticism you lashed out. I understand that the reviews were quite vicious regarding the structure of your story and I know reviews that criticise your writing are rarely nice to receive. However in your first chapter you did ask for criticism. Just something to think about.

Having said that i do really enjoy this, and to be honest i don't blame you for not updating for two years. I'm personally hopeless at updating when i say i will :) But i hope you continue this story.

KB

Great story, I'm sorry you got bad reviews. Anyway, I really like the plot and hope you update soon. :)

I really like this a lot. It's interesting to see jack upset an all.

update soon

Um, wow, I really love this story, I don't know why those two people gave it such negative reviews? I mean, I'm very paranoid, paranoid to the extreme, and well, I loved it. I definitely hope you update soon. I'm actually going to start beta-ing stories soon, and I didn't actually find anything wrong with it, at least not like those people said. They were altogether rude to you, and I obviously don't know you, but I don't think this story at least deserved that. People can be really rude, but don't let it get you down, you've got talent.

Cheers,

Artemis

i use flames to heat my oven so i can make yaoi pie. but thats irrelevant. i really like this! you should write more, and hopefully sooner than 2years from now. please? :D