i liked that you chose this scene, haven't read a fan fic of it before. In fact, the whole story was amazing, so good on you!

This is really such a well written fic! I love how well you kept Hermione true to her character, and all the emotions were really well played :) Good job!

- littlefish

Lovely collection of stories! I really liked the scenes you chose to do - especially the more uncommonly seen ones! You captured Hermione's voice wonderfully.

Great job!

Too cute! I love that we had the same idea, but yours was a lot funnier than mine.

I've really enjoyed reading these and am really happy that you've finished this story. The thought you've put into it shows. This chapter was unexpected, but I liked it: fun, interesting, real, and poignant at the end. Thank you for writing this story!

That was absolutely fantastic! Hermione oogling Ron's underwear! Then realizing she has to change clothes too. And shyly refusing to glance at Harry's privates. Then catching Ron gaping at her bra in hand! And technically the title still fits since he didn't see Hermione. Unless the mind's eye counts!

This was such a great story. I really liked this scene as the final chapter; it was really unexpected but extremely well done :)

It was a great scene to do, but I must say that I wish you were writing more chapters!

I still do like how he didn't see her here, but loved the ideas going through her head in this scene.

I like how you switched POV's but it still fit with the title.

I like the conflict in her of happy to go to the ball, but wondering if Ron will start to notice her.

I'm glad our reviews made you happy! And encouraged you to keep writing!

Sweet, interesting and honest as always. I love Harry's line at the end, he's so sweet!

i really did like this chapter, i like the scene alot, although i agree that there were other moments or non-moments you could have gone with. otherwise, its very well written and i just love hearing hermione's thoughts so i really cant complain! love it. cant wait for the next chapter.

It is totally in character for Hermione to doubt whether he said her name or not. Harry knew. Of course, huge parts of this book could be called "When Ron Doesn't See Hermione." And of course, she would hate it that she hadn't been there. He was such a jerk with Lavender Brown. It was in character, but come on Ron. My kids refer to anyone who is in a relationship but afraid to break it off as having a Ron/Lav going.