Hiii I just wanted to say that I read this fic all the way back when it was still unfinished and every once in a while I come back to visit because I forever consider to be one of the cleverest and humblest Naruto time travel fics out there. Seriously it's been over 10 years and I still can't get over how CONCISE you made things like "no unnecessary drama no bullshit, here's a wedding now we're done." It's very nice, and I'm glad we have this little snapshot of how good and personal Naruto was before we started having reincarnations and aliens thrown in.

ok, who tf... shisui... tobi is shisui, holy shit, tobi has kotoamatsukami.

Holy cow, that was some borderline crack right there : ) loved seeing team 7 just troll with the world, it’s still kinda hard to see Kakashi with anyone and well, Kiba is crazy but that’s Kiba, I’d seen this story profile a few times before but had never clicked on it, finally did- I’m glad to say definitely not a waste of time

“Alas! I am slain!” Absolutely perfect.

Nice story I have been trying to find a good story in a

Hello !
I know it's been a while since you wrote this, but I still wanted to leave a review.
At the beginning, I thought it was going to be a serious story, but you managed to make it funny without even trying, and the story still made sense. The funny parts didn't seen forced and I liked the running gags (Sasuke seeking vengeance, Sakura being useless or the therapy jutsu, etc).

After all these years, I hope you're proud of this story, even though your writing style probably changed through the years.

Thanks a lot for writing this, I had a really good time reading it (even though it's one of the reasons I slep ) !

One of the most entertaining and light-hearted fictions I've ever read, and I've read a lot.

I don't think I've read something as dopey as this but I can say it was a blast to read. The humor was well placed, the interactions between the characters were insanely fun, and while it was short, it managed to tie itself up well at the end.

I plan to check out your other stories when I can, but I know for sure you are one of my favorite authors thus far!

cheers

Warning! This is not a joke! Carry on reading! or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
ONCE THERE WAS A LITTLE GIRL CALLED CLARISSA, SHE WAS 10 YEARS OLD AND SHE LIVED IN A MENTAL HOSPITAL, BEACUSE SHE KILLED HER MUM AND DAD.
SHE GOT SO BAD SHE STARTED TO KILL ALL THE STAFF IN THE HOSPITAL SO THE GOVERMENT DECIDED THAT THE BEST IDEA WAS TO GET RID OF HER SO THEY SET UP A SPECIAL ROOM TO KILL HER, AS HUMANE AS POSSIBLE BUT IT WENT RONG THE MACHINE THEY WERE USEING WENT WRONG. AND SHE WAS SAT THERE IN AGONY FOR HOURS UNTILL SHE FINALLY DIED.
NOW EVERY WEEK ON THE DAY OF HER DEATH SHE RETURNS TO THE PERSON THAT READS THIS LETTER, ON A MONDAY NIGHT AT 12:00 SHE KREEPS INTO YOUR ROOM AND KILLS YOU, BUT SLOWLY AND PAINFULLY SLOWLY CUTTING DIFFRENT PARTS OF UR BODY THEN WATCHES YOU BLEED TO DEATH IF YOU DONT SEND THIS TO 20 PEOPLE BY MIDNIGHT SHELL BE COMEING TO KILL YOU! SEND IT SO SHE HAS ANOTHER LOAD OF PEOPLE TO GET AND FORGETS ABOUT YOU DONT BELVE ME HEY?

I kind of expected to see a glimpse of the future

I love this. I didn't know I could love this as much as a I do, but I do. Thank you for your hard work.

go o od

The note

I LOVE these long-standing inside jokes!

I like the plan to perplex Gaara into decency!

This is hysterical, and I love it!

I love and support Living Minato so much!