A little short for my taste bit as I’ve said before OP Naruto usually is. That said I really enjoyed it. I am working on a Naruto predator fic myself but am having a little trouble focusing on it because I keep getting blocks on how I want to proceed with it. Sad there aren’t more out there

I honestly didn't expect these two to go together but you did great. It's a good blend of both, genuinely enjoyed it.

You have tsunade either bat-crap crazy or getting these "HORRIFIC", "TERRIBLE", "BODY DESTROYING" headaches a LOT in these stories, perhaps she should scan herself for a brain tumor, or for some kind of alcoholic neurodegeneration! Because it is NOT normal!

dude i am NEVER disappointed reading your stories. they are AMAZING

So just by the opening statements we (the readers) are supposed to believe that the diyamos of the countries have ABSOLUTELY no spies of their own and just take the words of decrypt old people (that shouldn't have any kind of power in the system that THEY THEMSELVES created) as gospel without checking it out? Hmmm.. NAHHHH Do you know why civilian "councils" don't exist in canon? Because they DON'T WORK! And danzo was FIRED after the uchiha incident, so it's just TWO OLD PEOPLE.. against the lineage and strength of a hokage and senju that was a sannin... Yeah that's NOT going to be ENOUGH.

I thought the apartment building BLEW UP(naruto had it wired when he left) as a "screw you" message, tsunade LAUGHED and loved it! (it was allllll the way in chapter 1)

Great story I really liked it a lot I liked the liked the pairings and how powerful Naruto got and the plot all in all good job writing the story.

Big strong studly and aggressive Naruto pushes so many buttons... SO MANY BUTTONS...

It's like the mens department at Macy's, All over again.

well another hinata cunt munching story god i hatw the useless stalker who never in any cannon or fan story dose a damn thing. yyet any other girl is bascxaly turned into a sasgay slut and lets not forget the all powerful hokage who taken out and ordered by advisiors... yep the sucks balls

Don't you miss the days when you could write a Naruto and cover it it seven chapters?

Ch 7 A prethetour Naruto with all that knolige and half of that half Demon into unbeatable force decimated the guilty.

Damn can you make a naruto story without hooking him up with hinata

Predator fanfic was cool try reading some Naruto and Xenomorph fanfics and try creating one of your own I'm already writing one making him female but in your story you should make him male and give him a small harem

Awesome you should try doing a Naruto and Xenomorph fanfic

Man great work I am a big fan of your naruto stories love it when its naruhina and harem and the bashing on sakura