I feel so unsatisfied, that bastard atobe deserved more than that and there is no way Jirou doesn't understand what he did by coming back and breaking up relationship. In my opinion they both deserve to be stepped on and squished.

where is part two i need to know what happens next!

I really hope that you at least finish the final two shot in this story. I neeeeeeed to know how it ends 3

So glad that you're now back to this fandom! I would like you to update The Revenge, A new year, When it rains, Hidden Past, and Finding them. Oh man, that's a lot, gomen! I just love all of these stories!

Looking forward to see another story of yours updated!

I LOVE IT

You should do Seigaku friendshipwith Ryoga as the subject. It should be the day Ryoga abandoned the family, died, etc...

The photo discription is PERFECT

Wow,I liked that! Especially the song.. It was really good, I found myself having made up a song for the lyrics and practicing them... hahaha

Wahhhh this is so cute m Ryo-chan is adorable Atobe sucks...

EEEEEEE! XD SENSUAL PAIR! XD...LUV this pairing! XD So kawaii!

ATOBE! SHAME ON U FOR MAKING RYOMA SAD!

that statement about breaking up was too hurried and quick. most people wouldn't say that as soon as someone woke up from a deadly head injury, they would at least wait until the person is out of the hospital or until a few days have passed.

i feel like you should continue this story into a separate two shot so we readers can find out what happens to atobe nyah!

please do make a sequel, I really like this pair.

Oh, jezuz my heart...consumed...with fluffy angst