FUCK im gona tear every civiliant concil and that old monkey too
Damnt after read this chap my blood so boil up

Okay, from what I remember, I don’t think Naruto has to go to that Turtle Island to get better control over Kurama, as for the other thing, I vote Sasuke

I like the concept of feral Naruto, but I have a couple of critiques/suggestions:
1. Find a beta reader and/or an editor, you write decently enough but sometimes the consecutio temporis goes out of the window. If you prefer working on your own then pay attention not to switch between past tense and present tense.
2. Naruto is 9, mid-way through academy right? The fact he can slaughter civilians is perfectly believable, chunins too since they were drunk, but on-duty ANBU? Seems a bit too much... Maybe leave them just injured? Or you can leave things as they stand but you need a good reason for it.
3. The council trampling the Hokage and then going behind his back too sounds pretty unbelievable too, I mean, they're forcing the hand a bit in my opinion: if they continue pulling that kind of stunts and endangering Naruto, Hizuren would probably have them sentenced to summary execution and be done with that. Dictator, you know...
That said I think this has lots of potential! Keep up the good work!

update pleaaseee

I am looking forward to chapter 19 and I hope Naruto gains a Shinigami Zanpakuto.

Update plz

I have a challenge for you. Its on my account WolfAndBookLover. I have a feeling you can do it justice. Also I love the story so far! :) U

i really like this story it is a very good read and i did like this chapter i think they are the best paring it the story and i was so glad to read a new chapter keep it up and thanks

It's so cute

Sorry for the spaming... oh and NARUTOXHINA FOR LIFE!

NARUTO STOP BEING A WIENER LOLOLOL

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I can totally see some drawings of the parts where Hinata is giving naruto an ear scratch while on the other side of the wall is the nurse and Jirarya with lewd thoughts, and where naruto is tickling Hinata with his tails, those would be very cute and hilarious. :D

Hey so you return Naruto with the tails, but what happened to the good Naruto without the tails, the one that Itachi and Kisame kidnapped? I have to wonder why does everyone think that if Naruto absorb the nine tails he'll develop fox features? Not forgetting that the fox is chakra and not flesh and blood and considering that he is part Uzumaki. I really don't think that he would have developed any features of the fox physically, emotionally, that's a different thing. I like your development of Hinata. This is the best I've seen in a long while. Too many authors try to make her look like Sakura before Tsunade and stray so far off of the canon her, that she becomes so weak and pathetic that Naruto always have to save her. She doesn't have that amazing fighting ability from canon, that even Kiba can take advantage of her with ease. She doesn't develop herself, so no new chakra develop. No twin lion fists.

Stop that. There are tiny hearts in my eyes. Stop that right now... AAAAWWWWW! Furry Naruto is Back!...NO! STOP DOING THAT!

*Ahem*... good chapter over all. A quick view of Naruto resolving (himself?) might be good though