This was truly good and aligned with the story. It was easy to visualize this actually happening. Great writing and thanks for taking me back to the Z days. I enjoyed it!

Strong first chapter! Definitely will continue reading.

Reading it for the 2nd time after 7 years. Characters are right on point. This story just doesn’t get old

Omg thank the lord there is a sequel...hallelujah.

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Fucking Vegeta. Fuck.

Damn. Damn. Damn.

Poor pizza guy, he better be nicer if he wants them to deliver in the future lol. I love this about your writing, that you still think to include little details that he wouldn’t have experienced and what it’s like for him.

YASSSSSSSS!

There is nothing short of brilliance in your writing, the struggle is real with their tension!

Oh my fuck. I literally hope you still read comments at least, because I have to ask you if you have ever read anything from Karen Marie Moning...I am addicted to your story because you write like my favorite author in life, which is the biggest compliment I can give as she is the single best writer besides you now.

There is literally nothing you can write poorly. Or mediocre, or anything but fucking incredible. I feel like no matter what praise I give it will be trite in comparison to the caliber of your writing, like I can truly find nothing to critique or expound upon to be useful because this is that fucking dynamic.

Perfection. His outburst, her taking him in a stride and the knowledge that he does have trust in her.

Damn. Damn. So much in one chapter, I can’t hang with how good this is. Hilarious and playful to calculated and lusty... I am literally running the gamut of emotions here.

As I read this, I am praying that somehow you are still currently writing for this pairing.