I have the same problem with commas, so far the story is good and flows well meaning the commas are working

Holy shit on a shingle.
I fell in love with Black Lagoon the first time I watched it, and it didn't take very long to become my #1 favorite anime.

And YOU, good sir, have used its cast of wonderfully fleshed-out characters (the best part of the series, by far) to tell a love story for the ages. I'm not sure which was more beautiful: how developed and organic Rock and Revy's relationship was, or how believable you made Revy's return to sanity. Either way, if I wasn't so emotionally stunted, I would've been crying tears of joy by the end.

I can safely consider this story to be among THE GREATEST on this site.

You should be proud. You've written a masterpiece.

It was good dude it’s sad it ended by not all good things stay forever

Peace out

dat was amazin

That sounds exactly like a Roanapur wedding should go lmao.

Please make more, i find myself always going back to read this, even printed it out and turned it into a book of sorts. Best fanfic ive read!

Fuckin' A, mate. Best fan fic I have ever had the pleasure of reading. Thank you so much for writing it. You didn't compromise the essence of the original series at all and you really retained the personalities of the characters which I fucking loved. Thanks so much again. You were top notch. Please write more!

Ok. First, this is one of the best fanfics I have read. Second, how the fuck are you supposed to have me believe that Revy didn't get pregnant with those two fucking like 6 times a week?

I really like it. A nice balance of sexiness !

Please just one more: time skip to when they grow old, and have kids, even though her vagina was "messed up". .

You have written a very grand and elaborate story for the Lagoon Company and acquaintances. The tension between Rock and Revy leading to a wild night in the Yellow Flag, then turning into a serious relationship was very well written and executed flawlessly. I loved reading this story from beginning to end and overall I am sad to see it end but the ending was beautiful. You are a truly talented writer!

ISTG THIS WAS ONE OF THE FUNNIEST CHAPTERS EVER LMAOOOOOOOOK

I hope you see this and please email me if you do! I tried to reply to your email but It wouldn’t let me. I finished reading your story and I love everything you did with it. I have always been a dreamer... I love anime.. especially stories where there are great fight scenes and epic hero battles such as in: Naruto, Attack on Titan, SAO, and Black Lagoon. However, despite my true, and ever exponentially expanding, love for anime, because of me being a dreamer, I have always hated it to a certain extent as well. The beautiful possibilities in anime havemade me not care for this life anymore.. your story was fantasti, but sadly it did the same. Don’t worry, I am not suicidal to any degree, but I do seriously wish I could live the life of some of these characters.. especially Rock. I have always fantasized a life such as his for some reason, and reading this made it worse haha. Although I’m only tellig you this because I’d never feel comfortable telling anyone else.. they would think I am a freak probably. A guy who fantasizes about living a life of an anime character. I guess it is weird.. although I am so serious about it that I am going to college for Computer Science and I plan on learning extensive coding so I can help program and design something such as the full dive system that is seen in SAO. Humans are actually rather close to multiple breakthroughs in this type of technology and I sincerely believe I’d be able to help finish one long before the time I die. Hopefully, if you’d be interested, I’ll get it done before you go too(: Also, I know a lot of my reviews aren’t really reviews so I apologize. Please email me if you see this and bother to read it.

Hah! What a beautiful ending. I am truly envious of Rock. He has it all doesn’t he? What a life. Thanks for an amazing read.

I'm really sad I'm almost to the last arc already. This is soooo good.