Hahaha, that French is awful, but it made me laugh. I think it's completely irrelevant since this fic is several years old but I wouldn't mind correcting the French if you'd like.
And so far it's a really nice fic, your style gets better since the first chapter.

Excellent story. Fairly far off from canon when it came to the canonical characters, but once I was able to get past that, I really got into it. You really know how to make great OC’s and interweave them into a story. The only negative critique I have is that the story didn’t really have much magic. I could probably count on one hand, the number of spells used. They’re at a school of magic afterall, so the story would have benefitted from some spellcasting, charming, hexing, etc. Other than that, it was a very good story with lots of great characters and character dynamics. Honestly, 50 chapters of Cassie and Lily wasn’t enough. I could probably read 100 if they were just as well written. Solid 9/10.

Enjoying the world/characters you’re building. I like slash but love that this is more about a story, more about getting to know the characters. Plus I’m a sucker for “coming of age” stories. Looking forward to seeing where this will go!

No matter how many times I read this it always just makes me feel so happy. I love how the canon characters are portrayed like how good of a father hArry is and how great of a god brother Teddy is. I love how commonly controversial and misunderstood concepts such as homosexuality and adoptive family are presented. I love the development of the characters, I love the smooth incorporation of your OCs. I love how Scorpius is as a big brother, and I love the way you’ve written Louis in regards to Lily. I absolutely, positively adore Cassiopeia, she just has this feel to her that I honestly just can’t get enough of, not to mention I’ve always been a sucker for female characters called Cass/Cassie. Whenever my depression is weighing me down I can always count on this story to help my spirits back up. I don’t usually review but I felt after so many times reading this and never tiring of it, the story and you as the author deserved public documentation of my respect and admiration.

I should re-read this at some point. This story was such a journey and I would really enjoy going on this journey again.

Well, I'm not really a fun of whole lgbt(xxx) move (actually I'm bisexual just I think that lgbt actions kinda harm nonhetero community), but so far I like the way story is going. Maybe I'm not a big fan of telling everyone everywhere about Lily sexuality, but I believe this is how story supposed to be.
Dunno what I meant by this review just spilling my thoughts here. Please forgive me my poor English, simple it's not my first language.
-unknown fan

So far i really enjoying this fanfic. Just hoping there'll be more action between Cassiopeia and Lily. Well, propably will be, just have to keep reading.

Great job SQ hope you doing well!

I knew —and remembered— it and his. He's so cute and all the girls matured since their first year and become more adult and I love them very much.

At next time,
Byyyee,
Z…

Sorry but I forgot to mention that: The attraction without regarding the gender of the person is to be pansexual whereas bisexuality is to be attracted by two or more genders. So maybe Cassie is pan not bi but if you write bi, I'll take it even if it's not my own definition.

Byyyee,
Z…

Another great chapter you have write. I love how their summer ends and it's really fun when they say they dating each other. And Cassie is become less shy and I love her so much. And Lily is definitely jealous but too cute to be angry to her. I wait for the next chapter a few minutes —how long that to take me to go home or an another boring lesson.

Byyyee,
Z…

I smelt at the scene between the little girl and they (my Hufflepuff part, perhaps…)
I think Camille is not a funny character anymore. Please, leave them alone and happy !
(And you lost me in dresses' descriptioncuz it's in english and above all the description, the dresses' ones are not my cup of teaBut I can't wait to read another chapter (maybe not immediately, cuz it's past midnight right now and I'm dying for sleep…)

Byyyee,
Z…

I adore very much this chapter. Their first date, how Cassie's parents know this… Arrrrgh, I LOVE IT ! SOOO SOOO MUCH !

At next chapter, kiss on your cheeks,
Byyyee,
Z…

Hi!

Finally, the two are kissing WOO-HOO ! And the conversation between Lils and Scorp is amazing and I think in the near future, he'll accept their relationship *fingers crossed*
And maybe, their friends don't accept this ? Oh, please, let them be happy (after all this time..., please), please...

See you on next chapter,
Byyyee,
Z...

I don't know what to say but I stamp to read the next chapter (and I love —again— your fanfic !)

Byyyee,
Z…

Yeah, finally, (Ma)"RicaLouis are together ! WOOHOO !
I'm about to die if I don't have the follow-up NOW. So let's move on next chapByyyee,
Z…