Learn to spell fucker!

Why just why did you write this i agree with the person that wrote i hope you never have kids. If you were the one that taught your child whatvthat was by how Johanna showed Dawn then you are a sick person plz just dnt write anymore incest

Please do a part 2

Very nice

Wow that was an interesting read. Dawn really grew up here.

Its better than most of the mother/daughter porn crap I've read. I dislike the mother/daughter porn theme, but it was nicely written.

Well written, really.

It just doesn't sit right with me. About a mother and a daughter, especially when she's only ten years old.

Nevertheless, it was written well

Eh, I'm not that big on Mother/Daughter stuff. It kinda freaks me out...but it was writtin well. I just came on here to see if you said when you were going to update Model to Star. I hope you do soon, because it was just starting to get good.

Wowza :P

I love this sooooo much!How sick am I?

;D

HOT!Please update this soon!I think I orgasmed while reading !

Very nicely written, althrough the theme is a bit weird :D

I can't wait for the next story.

please update! i loved it!

dude what the fuck how the hell can you write something like this you are a sick bastard i hope to god that you never have kids btich go to hell die dieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee