This is one of my favorite fics ever! I always find myself coming back to reread it again, like I already did so many times over the years.

That was delightful! And so funny. I like that you so clearly avoided James taking advantage of drunken Lily.

Lol, drunk Lily is pretty fun reading about, though I'm almost positive it's more fun to write about (just speaking from personal experience of writing about ridiculous characters XD). That story was awesome! I love reading your stories! ;P

Aww I love the banter! You did really great. Properly written even though Lily sounds a bit weird. I know she's drunk and all, but not every word she said would be clipped. Anyway, good work!

Quite near the end there was a typo, it switched to first person instead of third. It should be lily said instead of I said.
Otherwise, lovely story

I WAS GIGGLING LIKE A FIVE YEAR OLD DURING THIS ENTIRE FIC
AND THEN THAT ENDING
YOU LITERALLY MADE MY CHRISTMAS
AND IT'S THE MIDDLE OF MAY

Interesting story…
Pretty good.:)
~ro

Honestly this is the most depressing fluff piece ever. It's not even really funny.

Guy crushes on girl for years, he invites her to a game, she kisses everyone but him. She then deigns to hit on him after blatantly slapping him in the face? Fuck that, I couldn't do it, drunk or not. Sadness destroys libido.

Your stories are brilliant and this one is very good too. Excellent one.
But don't know why got a bit irritated with Lily in this one, she is being a bit of a bitch to James. I shouldn't say this but she irritated me a little sorry.

Haha!

Poor James, poor Lily, and the games they play with each other's minds. And you tell it all so perfectly. Thank you so much, B.C Daily, for being amazing and giving me Jily.

This is my first review for you but I just want to let you know that I'm a huge fan. I'm sure you get this a lot but your writing is just fantastic. The most giddying and lovely writing I've ever seen done unprofessionally. Love you and I CANNOT WAIT for the next chapter of Commentarius! Keep being unbelievably fantastic!

I love this it was so funny and all the characters were good as well! ;) xxxxxx

Haha best ending ever

Lol! Love it. Such a funny story. Brilliant. So wish you'd continue into Christmas day! So much hilarity and wit mixed up with perfect mixed up LJ! Amazeballs! I don't know why I'm saying that weird word but you inspired me!