Hi. It’s been two years. Hope you come back and finish this soon. You’re very talented in expressing the emotions of the characters. Keep up the good work!

love what you've written so far. hoping u come back to it someday

I thought u said Grover and annabeth WEREN'T going to be main supporting characters; u just tossed luke off the quest in favor of a bloody 12 year old. the idiocy of it astounds me...even chiron who basically demanded it thinks it's a dumb idea. ugh, so much for the good guy luke story I was hoping this would turn out to be

rant all you want it is your story no one should tell you what to do

I simply wanted to say that I absolutely adore your Percy Jackson fanfictions! I haven't tried your other stories because I'm less familiar with those books and animes, but you are an incredibly talented writer and I can't wait to read more of your work! Thank you for the beautiful, deep characters you portray. Thank you for the intricate plots you weave and spin. And thank you for the long, engaging updates that leaves one hungering for more. You are a wonder writer and I hope you will continue on with your Percy Jackson fanfics since they are ridiculously amazing. Either way, thanks for what you have already written and I hope you will forever find joy and contentment in your writimg. Have a wonderful day! Love, some random person you don't even know.

I really hope you continue this.

Just finished reading this story again for the third time. I thought I might feel differently, but I still really believe that this is one of the best fics written, right up until Percy reports what happened with Luke to the Olympians. After that, it just feels like this story did a 180 and a nose dive. The relationship with Eddie, who was an entirely unimportant and useless character, makes no sense to me, especially with him suddenly being revealed as a Norse demigod. That just seriously throws me off. There's so many great characters to choose from that Percy can take comfort in, and you pick a character who gets turned into stone in canon by Sally. I just hate that divergence, and even though I have nothing against the Norse gods addition, I don't understand why you decided to drop the main plot for it.

I also cannot understand the insert of all the gods who visit Percy. She's still just a demigod, as special as she may be, and there are Ancient Laws that prevent the gods from getting close to her. Break the rules as they may, I think the bit with Zeus is actually ridiculous and so out of character that it's like someone else wrote it rather than you. Zeus doesn't even make time for his own children, why would he start hanging out with Percy and being nice, wanting to go to the freaking movies...? Like what?

Percy was also extremely dumb in regards to Luke having romantic feelings for her. I think it would have been more realistic for Percy to be aware of Luke's feelings, and possibly having some stirrings of her own. Luke was great with her until she returned from her quest. He's handsome, talented, relatable and emotionally vulnerable with her. Why would Percy not even consider him as a romantic interest? I think the betrayal would have been worse for her if she did have feelings for him, and would be an interesting side to explore throughout the series, even if the feelings never expand due to the betrayal.

After everything that happened, her mother, the quest, Luke's betrayal, her father... it seems more likely that Percy would want to take a step back from the Greek world and find some normalcy and stability that she no longer has. Getting involved in a relationship when her life is so out of whack, much less getting involved with a bunch of Gods, seems very unlike the character you spent so many chapters fleshing out. Hades, I can understand her visiting and bonding with, but all the others, plus the whole thing with Eddie, just doesn't fit with the flow of everything you previously wrote. I can't see her joining Kronos and Luke after he stabbed her, but I also don't see her wanting to get too close to the gods either. Luke ended up as he did because of Hermes, Ares used and betrayed her, her father abandoned her, Zeus tried to kill her, and she's seen how affected the demigods are being ignored by their parents. I can't see her wanting anything to do with them at this point, and probably not for a while.

I love your Percy so much. I love your story so much. But it truly feels to me like after chapter 12, someone else took over and started writing. I hate to be a hater, and I certainly don't want to offend you because I really do adore your writing, but I truly wish you would go back to chapter 12 and start rewriting all of the content from that point on. At the very least, get rid of Eddie and Zeus because those parts are the things that turned me off the most. I really love this story, and believe it could easily be the best FemPercy story. I just strongly feel this way and hope one day you'll come back and continue from chapter 12. Also, you need to get rid of all those awful Author's Notes complaining about flames. Not nice to read, and those people aren't worth addressing like that. Thanks so much. Best of luck.

#rr I love you story so much! Anyone who puts down you or your work is stupid and hasn't truly tried to enjoy it. I understand that you life doesn't revolve around this book. I appreciate every chapter and update no matter when it is posted.

Author-samaThanks for writing this story! I loved this chapter and can’t wait to see how her relationship progresses with ares, Apollo, and hermes. Also... do you have a beta? I didn’t see any mistakes in your punctuation and grammar, so if you don’t, Awesome job! I love your plot and character development. Especially the developments of platonic love, the I did enjoy the ares Percy hotel chapter. I can’t wait to read more if you decide to write another chapter ~frozenteen

Ahhh this is one of the best Percy Jackson stories I’ve ever read! I love percy’s interactions with the gods and how you’ve made Percy your own. You’ve done an amazing job with this story and I can’t wait to read more of it

I’ve missed this fanfic! I’ve been here ever since 2013 and I just started rereading this. This gives me so much happiness that there’s been more chapters and I can’t wait to read more! I’ve been a fan of yours for a long time and I admire your writing. Hope there’s more coming out!

i hope you do choose to update the story. it's really good and i would love to read more

hi, just letting you know that this story is one of the best I've read on fanfiction. I love the plotline and it's well written. I can understand if you've stopped updating due to losing inspiration. Keep writing and let us fans know if you decide to come back to this story.

I agree with you. What's so sad is that the copyright and plagiarism laws surrounding fanfiction are so murky.

Hey,
Can you please update?
This is, hands down, the best female Percy Jackson story I have ever read!