Reviews for The Butterfly's Wings |
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xcandiedoll chapter 1 . 7/14 Beautiful plot and writing. I wish it was longer hehe. A lot of interesting things here. It is rare to find quality fics like this that have the Yondaime Hokage in action right. Finally, someone changing the system. It is unfair that Minato only reigned for like 1-2years as kage in canon. Konoha would have flourished. I find it really hard to understand whats on his mindwhy he had to give up his life for the sealing (assuming the Sandaime can). He could have saved Konoha better from bigger evils if he was the Hokage. However, the show would be named Minato then, no? haha. I liked the idea from your fic that he could chase and dispose Madara had he survived the Kyuubi attack. Not farfetched. If he was instantly able to see the big picture during Obito's attack on Naruto's birth, given the right leads there's no doubt he could put the pieces together about Madara and truly stop him. He thinks and acts objectively. He has the skills. Way too OP. No other words. Seeing him kick asses in your story is quite chilling and cruel, but he is on a position where he could be naive. Some quite of responses and discussions in this story's comment section here. Can't believe this is already 10 years old. Truly a fantastic one, best regards to you author-san~ PS I think I missed the point about the title and the ending about the butterfly, someone care to explain? |
Qul chapter 1 . 5/20 Nice story |
Krysania chapter 1 . 12/16/2019 Lovely story but kinda disapointing that Kushina was presented as just a housewife. |
Gouravsilentreader chapter 1 . 9/13/2019 Amazing story Love it |
Monster King chapter 1 . 10/8/2018 Great story |
Zarroc789 chapter 1 . 8/19/2018 BAMF is the only description of Minato that works |
Rake1810 chapter 1 . 7/11/2018 Mianato was a BAMF. Always fun to see it done right. |
ArtimuosJackson chapter 1 . 6/12/2018 Everything is great except how Minato handled Kyubi because the bijuus are purely made of chakra. |
fingerprint-by-fingerprint chapter 1 . 9/24/2017 Absolutely loved this! I really loved your interpretation of Minato as Hokage! Thanks for posting! :D |
thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 9/2/2017 minato-op, funny how much having someone competent in charge can change things |
pikachucat chapter 1 . 5/29/2017 awesome |
Jileine chapter 1 . 2/5/2017 Interesting to see an actual competent Hokage for once! I wonder, though, if Minato will ever learn that until all traces of Ootsutsuki bloodline are eradicated for good, Madara-esque figures will continue to threaten Konoha, or the new threat will have to wait long after Minato is dead? |
Haygomez chapter 1 . 9/30/2016 your stories are greatly appreciated for their simple wording and completion. thanks |
RenesmeVivio chapter 1 . 7/23/2016 Such a cute story well done |
nightreader14 chapter 1 . 2/28/2016 Great story; i feel most of the praise has already been said by other reviewers, so i won't repeat them. One thing that intrigued me is the name, "The Butterfly's Wings". You implied that this is the source of Minato's power; are you implying that he can control/manipulate atomic power? I'm not sure if this interpretation is correct, since i don't really see any reference to this sort of power in his dealings with Madara/Akatsuki. Or are you talking about the power of space/time travel, in relation to the theory of the Butterfly Wing effect and Chaos theory(the theory that small changes have big consequences)? Or is it some other power entirely? please pm/mail me your ideas/intentions, this has been bugging me for quite some time. |