Wow I loved this story! Too bad you haven't updated in 10 years and will likely never read this review. Haha, oh well. I really enjoyed the 35 chapters you did write. It was totally awesome!

you’re nicely rounding this story up! Good job !

finally! Some Gryffindor fired the toture curse!

Nonsense. Aurors are given permission to fire unforgivables as they wish! Even harry did fired cruciatus and imperious! Don’t try and make Gryffindors saints!

Gryffindor a good person is not the truth. Gryffindors are all bravery, but they are reckless when they decide. Not healthy, not good.

have you forgotten about this story? (not be rude or anything, i'm just asking because i kinda like it, lol)

the note that you’re “loosing your steam” is kind of funny to me considering you wrote abt 347 pages of this, I would consider it a HUGE accomplishment, you should be very proud of this superb story! Honestly at the moment it could pass as a finished story, all I’d say needs to be tied up is: what happened with Miles and his dad, what has Dumbledore been up to when he’s sneaking away from the castle and why did he lie abt harry to Lily, who Kyro’s parents are, who Raydens parents are (so Raydens parents can have closure maybe and learn about what a terrific son they’d had), something to clue to Voldemort dying soon, and of course most importantly did anyone ever go and tell poor Mcgonagall what happened when they ditched her at Hogwarts to go off to the hospital. Is she just... still sitting in her office, wondering if she’s gone mad or if she really DID see Harry Potter

oh boy this chapter was intense! I kind of wished there had been a warning of suicidal themes and self-harm because that stuff makes me squirm and feel pained. very good writing! I know this fic is like... literally over 6yrs but I’m still reviewing cus why not!

The most horrifying part was Redler sexually harassing Harry. I felt my heart stop and nearly cried during that part, I was terrified he was going to rape Harry. On that note, while I know this was written quite a while ago, it’s very ill advised to make a werewolf the predatory pedophille, given jk rowling has said that the werewolf curse is a (badly done and rather homophobic) metaphor for aids. It’s a THING to make gay men predators against children, and is often taught in churches that’s all they are. I’m a lesbian myself, so I couldn’t help but notice that Redler was the one being so creepy, and yeah, I would strongly advise against that in the future.

I am enjoying this story immensely. It’s beautifully written and very meaningful

This story is super fluffy and simply fantastic. I especially love how it concentrates on the theme of family. Sirius being awkwardly tsundere and mature. Lily being the badass mother (like Molly when she beat the heck out of Bellatrix).

I need to say I absolutely loved this fic and I'm really upset to see it unfinished! And it hasn't been updated in seven years, AHHHH!

Finally!
I read half of this like 6 MONTHS ago and then lost it!
It too me SO LONG to find it again!
Idk why I got the urge to put this here but bottom line
I REALLY LIKE THIS!
-FunYummy

I know that that you don't update this again and you haven't for 5 years but I just want to say that this fic is brilliant and one of the best that I've ever read.

Please finish! This is not only an awesome story but its a heart grabbing one...The love James, Lily, Sirius and Remus have and show for Harry is just heart squeezeing :)

plz continue

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