buena hisstoria

Hi dude love your story it is awesome and well thought out I agree with you completely about the filler arcs but you are killing me with not telling me about what tshunade fond out with blood tests

Señor seguiras escribiendo tu historia

I enjoy it a lot

ICHIGO KUROSAKI!
"Naruto Uzumaki, ninja prodigy of the Hidden Leaf."
"Versus Ichigo Kurosaki, the enormously powerful soul reaper from Bleach. He's Wiz and I'm Boomstick."
"And it's our job to analyze their weapons, armor,and skills to find out who would win a DEATH BATTLE!"

its Onoki fam

Re: author note about Uke, chap. 15

ACTUALLY, uke is the receiver (the one getting their ass stuffed) & seme is the one doing the probing & stuffing. Orichi-pedo can also probably do a really DEEP rimming & lubing with that tongue of his.

I feel sorry for Hinata after confessing her love for Naruto but gets rejectedI'm just hoping he would give hinata a chance to show her love until he feels it that she truly loves him, however it just ended as being friendsI'm Naruhina fan and this makes me sad.

Rape in the second chapter and people putting on different faces, dropped already.

Could instantly tell that this would be a steel toed boot Naruto fic, can already tell I'll hate it.

Yeah... thats fucked up dude. Just because their ninja doesn't mean they should get beat on as a joke. Thats actually a shit thing to do man...

Yeah that was ooc. Even for this Naruto. I won't say for people who dont to be spoiled, but.. there is no way Naruto would do that. He doesn't do that needlessly and that was needless. I am also getting tired of the bullshit. Didn't do anything cause he was 'lazy?!' Thats utter bullshit he is the Jonin Commander, that is one of the highest positions in the village. Yes he does not do unnecessary things with vigor, but when he needs to he is more than capable. The reason no one is able to adopt Naruto in cannon is most people are apprehensive of the Kyuubi and Hiruzen was apprehensive of people holding grudges.

Dude... do you not know how polyamory works? Even then sometimes romantic feelings around other partners spring up. Trust me I know people who are in polyamerous relationships with one guy and three girls. Their actually pretty happy.

Oh hell no ! Hinata and Kiba ?
What a retarded pairing, I'm out

I love this story so far but I have to say two things. 1) I'm only on chapter 11 and it's an amazing story. 2) if you hurt konan, even a hair after all she's been through in this story and the time it took for her to finally have a dream for herself. I WIIL FIND YOU AND BEAT YOUR ARSE WORSE THAN WHEN NARUTO WENT APE SHIT ON JIRAIYA... ok.