Great!

Whoops. Accidentally followed your amazing one-shot instead of favoriting it. :P I really loved this though! - I liked the backstory you gave Obito; just made his death that much more emotional. ;-; I also liked your writing style, very thought-provoking I think. Great job! I enjoyed reading this! )

The formatting took some getting used to, but I think it captured that 'fragmented' feeling just right. I thoroughly enjoyed Obito's tone of voice throughout this too! Always proclaiming himself to be awesome seemed very IC from what little we know about him.

I also liked your idea of Obito having a big brother and how he came to wear glasses because of him. The ending made me want to cry, though, with Obito insisting that Kakashi and Rin and Minato had to pay him back for always being late by making him wait this time, hopefully for a good long time.

Thanks for writing and sharing this! It's a nice look into Obito's life and chance to see how a clan like Uchiha could have a kid like Obito among them as well as how and why that came about. Really loved this~!

hahahaha this made me laugh at the end! I can totally imagine obito saying something like this!

From some reason I really want to laugh and I really want to cry and this story never really made me do either but I was there, at the edge of laughing and crying and I couldn't decide which was better or which was worse so i decided that writing this and explaining that to you was better than either laughing or crying. Yeay. This was-dare I say it?-awesome.

I love the style of writing you used here-you captured Obito perfectly. From his backstory to the hardships he covered up to the attitude, it was all pretty damn perfect. I bow to the greatenss! *bows bows* :D Wonderful!

I love this. Bittersweet and warm at the same time.

I loved it! Obito is a really flexible character to do things like this with, and I think you nailed his personality, even with the sad stuff. Nice job!