Reviews for Hitchups
Guest chapter 11 . 7/27
Intresing
DespicableDoubt12 chapter 40 . 7/9
This fic is amazing and I love it . it is like the growup type of stories that have been popping up (for me.

The attention to folklore and geography is stunning and makes this a solid ficbelievable,IRL in a sense).

The pain that the pair go through is believable and adds to character but I feel that Toothless was not given a character arc aside from sacrificing more and more for Hiccup.

The deviation of the ending from the movie is good and shows the desperation of the demon-thing from Jötunn due to Hiccup stealing Toothless and letting her be for so long compared to Canonjust a reason I thought would fit ).

The balance of the writer filling in details versus the reader's brain filling details is something I highly depend on and that balance was varying throughout the story which made the Milkagard chapters hard to read (also because the dialogue did not further the story or the character development). Chatter is fine in small bursts .

Maybe I'm wrong to compare this against movies but this story could've been shorter by around 6-7 chaptersvery rough approximation) . Or replaced with intermittent character development of the teens in Berk which fits and furthers the cause of the "growup" type of story and fleshes the characters further and you could have shown their improvements alongside Hiccup's and Toothless's .

It would've made the scenario of Hiccup going back to Berk more enticing to the reader and made the next actI guessmore alluring

and also to create a noticeable rising action which was somewhat absent throughout this story even though it has a solid plot line .

This fic is too big to pick apart in detail but the point is that the story is amazing overall but it could've been more deeper about the characters Eg:Astrid getting over her mother's death could've been drawn out to better detail and also shown as a "matchstick" to make her 180 now more believableI still believe her 180 in Canon because she was still young and would like freedom but after battling so much I don't think she would just change) by saying that she doubts her own actions now.

The fic is nice and worth reading and memorable thank you for writing this.
Guest chapter 12 . 7/6
Hiccup getting that merssy
WVIVO777 chapter 40 . 7/4
I just want to say thank you for writing this story. I found it a yesterday and it managed to capture my attention so completely that I finished it today, I fell into this universe you made and I loved every second of it. I'll be checking out your other stories and probably reading even more of them but for now, I just want to say this one was incredible and it managed to fully capture my love and affection for it. So thank you so much and I hope you have a nice day.
HappieJay chapter 9 . 6/27
bravo for your use of rôsts
WhyIsThePuppetSticky chapter 38 . 5/27
One thing that I've noticed is that you seem to mix Book!Verse and Movie!Verse, especially in the dragons department.
CallMeUrmo chapter 40 . 5/19
Just an amazing story.
xMarjoleinx chapter 30 . 5/15
I ship Hiccup and Camicazi!
Razzareth chapter 40 . 5/11
I don't care about the environmental description being potentially lackluster. I want a sequel! Please never stop writing these.
Abhasclash chapter 40 . 5/10
10k likes, finally! I've been waiting for this.
BTW, you still updating LeidEpilogue, right?
httyd lover chapter 1 . 5/7
very good please continue
FriggleBerry chapter 16 . 5/3
The language stuff was fine at first but too many chapters of fucked English translation is getting old
LeoMac315 chapter 5 . 4/22
Interesting to put Camicazi and Astrid together. Who will Stormfly belong to, if she does show up in the story?
LeoMac315 chapter 3 . 4/21
Got to chapter 3 and I'm loving it! This is the HTTYD book we deserved all along! Hopefully Valka and Cloudjumper will show up(?). They're my favorite! Their friendship goes so much further back than Toothless and Hiccup's!
gaoHNQ chapter 6 . 4/6
Oh my Thor! You won't believe how surprised and happy I was when I saw the. I literally just finished Fjordmustang's work yesterday. Thank you so much for writing Toothless' line in this format!
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