Reviews for He Will Be Mine
W8W chapter 43 . 7/27
Aru and Lilith really should understand that revenge is fool's game, they have nothing to gain from this.

Tsunade worries are good plot point.

I wonder how it will go idiot Kariya. He already learn Naruto heritage.

I like how professionalism make Naruto and Tsunade not think about her hiding his heritage and focus on work.

Part about Jiraiya potential variability to succubus is hilarious.
Ashkan Dehno chapter 43 . 7/27
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far
The Cowardly Christian chapter 43 . 7/25
Nice to see you alive an well!

Great chapter!

God be with you and be safe!
Dragon Man 180 chapter 43 . 7/25
I can't wait to see what Rimona has to say about her idiot siblings calling Hinata out once she sees which ones are responsible for this fiasco. And I can see everyone forcing Jiraiya to only fight any Incubui while the rest take on the Succubi, making him weap and annoy the Incubi.
devilzxknight86 chapter 43 . 7/25
Hope hinata can detect ino problem
Locothehood chapter 43 . 7/25
I'll reply again in a year

just kidding

not a bad chapter tho
El Publicano chapter 43 . 7/25
Uff se viene lo bueno, otra vez xd. Va a ser una tortura esperar por acción nuevamente pero sé que va a valer la pena.
Ryu wolf chapter 43 . 7/25
Been a while since I’ve seen any of your stories nicely done as always
VFSNAKE chapter 43 . 7/24
That Hyuuga Elder is an idiot. Besides, he didn't take into account that Naruto may take after his Mother in personality. As for Tsunade, she should have done something sooner given her family tree has Uzumaki blood in it and Senju are cousins at the same time. Yet the first day she meets him, she doesn't care. That always irked me. I mean...WTF?!
Leaf Ranger chapter 43 . 7/24
I really hope we don't see any of the eam captured or corrupted or anything like that.

Sorry, but considering where things went with this group...I'm worried that things like THAT could be a real possibility.

guess we'll see, won't we?

Keep up the good work.
EarlSilver chapter 42 . 7/12
Very good and I look forward to more.
MickDunD chapter 42 . 7/2
Hope you plan to continue this story. It’s an absolute pleasure to read.
El Publicano chapter 42 . 6/28
Joder! Esto está demasiado bueno, de hecho, es de lo mejor que he leído. Aunque al inicio me pareció raro lo de los demonios y eso, con el pasar de los capítulos empezó a tener más sentido la cosa.

Debo decir que es un gran fic. Debido a que actualízate el año pasado y ahora este 2020 está raro. Espero te encuentres bien de salud y esas cosas.
Zenobien chapter 13 . 5/26
Oh god he broke his fall with his d... is he okay? Who am I kidding it’s over for him... Rip Deidera’s Pe*is
Fanfic9000 chapter 28 . 4/29
you know, if lilith is using hinata has a hospital and naruto is the medicine, why not let aru have naruto be his host till lilith can get her own body? everyone wins. but nope lilith and aru are too stupid and horny to negotiate.
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