Un-Malfoied. Perfect

Um “Some are ready to point their wands to your chest and see how the killing curse would become you. You were a Slytherin, Lucius. Green would suit you, they think” is one of the sickest burns I’ve read in a fic, holy moly. Even if that wasn’t really an intentional one, very unexpected and comical. Also, I am so pleased to find all these little gems hidden in your descriptions of rooms/characters etc. It’s very very satisfying to read such a well written story.

This KreacherHarry conversation is everything

You write so smooth! I must admit that I kind of read over the fact that this is a slash fic with sirius in the beginning, which made me feel squeezy. I just can’t stop reading cause your writing is so good, so well done

The desk is such a nice touch! Some excellent subtle world building right there, don’t come across sth like that too often in fanfic.

I reread the fic and sfound it just as beautiful as the first time...
Most Authors portray Harry's character as they please, because they can. It lacks the essence of hp universe though. Harry is incoherent, short tempered, all jumping to action and a heart of gold. This fic does him justice, and so I love it.
There are very few sirry fics...this one is among my favourite.

Well you've got Hermione down. She's a self-righteous bitch, just like she is in the books. I'm not sure about your Sirius yet though. He seems to be way too mentally damaged at this point to be in any type of relationship.

PERFECT.

Brilliant!

I’m shy, how do I tel you what I think?

Ok, that was absolutely fantastic. I love every single word of it. I've read some of your fics before and loved them, but this one is special. Well done, really.

It's funny cause my older sister's name is Faith, I'm Hope, and my younger sister is Charity.

1st, I loved the story. Thank you very much for sharing with us all your talent & time. 2nd though this was done long ago & you'll probably never see it. though this isn't a usual pairing for me I assure you I have no trouble with the concept, but if you are still writing, it bothered me that throughout the story, even in the sex scenes, there is an over usage of the "godfather" title. after the initial "freak out" especially in their personal interactions it shouldn't be mentioned so often. Just my opinion...

Great story

Keep writing as life allows

Sorry but I don't think Sirius has anything to apologize for. I hate people who won't listen.
- Go I'll meet you downstairs
- Are you OK I can wait
- No go
- But are you sure..
- In what language do you want me to say it? I told you twice already why do you insist? You think I'll stay behind and hand myself? Eye roll.

I hate when people don't listen. If anything Harry should apologize: Sorry I didn't listen to you. I know we slept together but of course you are entitled to your privacy and I should have gone the first time you told me to.