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Oml! Why do the best fanfics always end on a cliffhanger?! Please update or I swear I’ll die

First time reading this. I really liked how much work you put into weaving the future knowledge we get about how things were at the start, without it feeling like a retcon.

The neglect Naruto gets is better explained without making it look justified. A new reason for Naruto and Sasuke's rivalry is there and the kids are a bit more competitive, but they still feel like kids. I especially liked how once they got out of school, they were just too focused on their own teams to have the energy to fight anymore.

I had kinda expected to see Kurenai, but I guess Hinata is confident enough that they didn't want to coddle her? Or were they supposed to meet but never did? I like the guy doing the job in her place, too.

Since Hinata is in a better relationship with her clan and Neji, how does marrying Naruto work? She seems to want to make sure he rebuilds his clan after all. I can think of some ways they would work around it but I dunno if they'd be too cracky.

I'm especially interested in how the Orochimaru subplot would work out. This Sasuke seems slightly less single-minded, but there are points in the forest where I can't imagine anyone else surviving the stuff he does to Naruto. Not that he has to jump him in the forest, but the wave arc got mentioned so I kinda expected it.

Have read this Naruto story several times and continue to enjoy reading it.
The story has plenty of suspense, action and funny parts.
This story left us with a major cliff hanger (hopefully update is forth coming).
The last update seems to be 5 years ago (time for author to update).

I swear my mind went straight to the gutter when Iruka berated Naruto, Hinata, Sasuke and Sakura

Have read multiple time and still find this a Very good story.
Enjoyed reading (action and suspense).
Needs to be continued, updated and completed (for your fans).
Know u say u are busy (find it hard to believe anyone is that busy).

Well this is awesome. Think I might have read part of this some time ago, but I'm glad to have read it now with so much more to enjoy.

I'm impressed with the characterization you've managed with such a large cast, especially given the number of OC's which you've kept in line marvelously, and look forward to seeing how the various plots and plans proceed.

Naruto and Hinata are sickeningly sweet and it's great. The Hyuga politics has been very interesting, as has seeing run on effects from the changes as they build up. I like seeing nice Neji, Neji and Tenten, and the whole scene with Lee's threat. The Uzu plot thread has my attention and I want to see where it goes.

A great story, hope to see more soon,
-Twy

Why are the best stories always unfinished? It’s been 4 years and nothing, what happened to this guy?

oh no sasuke u pissed off the wrong person

slowly but shurly giving hints on what they want to do

More please

I really hope you continue this fic. Its been an amazing read and I love the cliffhanger here at the end, even if its 4 years long. Lol.

So glad to have a story where the "villians" are still somewhat moral. They still care about the village above all else, as well as acknowledging that the "good guys" are competent and good for the village etc.
Refreshing change from Orochimaru and his ilk.

Isn't he supposed to be a jounin or close? No way he lets his stomach get to the point of growling.

I'm sad this seems like another fic where Naruto is shafted into only knowing how to shadow clone and literally nothing else.