Good story, he would have put this alternative at the end when the king tells him not to do that with his daughters in front of him, he attacks Rito "harmlessly", Rito takes Lala out of the way and is killed by the king, and in the end he says thanks to the king because he will finally have the peace he wanted, or something like that, xD greetings, see you, bye!

I want you to go back into writing about Rito “having fun” with all the girls in his life that includes: mea, Akiho, haruko, and yes ringo because this story is awesome

Not bad

Favorite chapter.

Please don't end your account with fanfiction. When you do your stories go with you and what I downloaded is not permanent. I lost a lot of stories because of this and I really liked them.

Another ending option how about riot has trust issue or is tramatized and cant have sex

Hey AUTHOR can you do another ending where lala give him the antidote but he was too scared(traumatic) to have sex wither her and did not have sex with lala ever

Man there no result for "To Love Ru: Riot and Otir" in anywhere

How about Tenjouin sensei

Rito is a huge disappointment because this story will show something that he will never do because he has rejected the Harem plan because of his love towards Haruna over all the other girls.

The entire storyline was good. I think you should add Mea and the others as well.

Alright read it all again, Wish you had a chapter with everyone talking about what happened, or like a 'Yami 2' where they figure out were they stand with Rito and this 'harem plan'. But was enjoyable for a smut story, so goodjob.

Omg RINGO was an option!? Why didn't it happen!?

I want to have a reaction from Ren... His body was just fucked. XD

So the story happened over again but had this ending :P Momo you sly devil/