This was very good I hope it continues

please continue the series it is really good

Naruto low key is a horrible Ninja. Dude only know flashy jutsu and no subtlety

The Monologue is too real. You need more present tense story

YOOOOOOOUUUUUU'RE BAAAAAAAACK! Good to see you're not dead! Gonna have to reread the fic, but I can't say I won't enjoy that.

Keep up the good work!

Hah. Hinata compaired him to a magicarp.

Good I am so happy to have this chapter I have been waiting for it for so long.

Can't wait for the next chapter and hope there will be some NaruHina next chapter.

I liked how Naruto beat the other genin easily and how Hinata and Hanabi are making up.

I like the Naruto getting fox ears and tail, not sure about him being immortal, but still good, I think you should of just extended his life and make not age as fast, along with the healing.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

glad for the chapter, though i did have to go back and reread the story. stiil good chapter

Both Naruto and Hinate are OC and the way she throws herself at Naruto is really beneath her.
I wanted to give this a chance, but uh uh, not working for me.

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I enjoyed this story as well even though reading it in first person was a little bit annoying. It would be nice if you were to update this sometime.

Oh no the showdown goes down before Hinata trains with Anko and unlocks her full potential. Aha there you are Konohamaru. I hope you update this.

It's been a while and I would like very much for you to continue. Hinata's fight against Hanabi cannot be left hanging in the air like this! :O

You spelled "sayonara" and "nichan" wrong. It's suppose to be "sayoonara" and "nii-chan".
God, i feel like Hermione right now 0_0 "it's leviOsa, not levioSA" It's no wonder i have no friends.
Must be hard for you to spell it because you can't use hiragana or kanji.
It would look like "さようなら” and ” にいちゃん” but for niichan you can use "oniichan" or "oniisan" or "niisan". Japanese is just so interesting. Damn, i love Japanese but i won't annoy you with anymore hiragana (unless you want me to?) because that would just make you feel bad. Feel good, live long, and kill titans! Bye! :D

Awesome Read! :D