LOVED THIS. Got me feelin' butterflies! And the ending!
I love how they are so in character. Thank you for writing this.

Love this fanfic. It did a really great job in making one emotional investing in the Rock/Revy romance. Hope that maybe a sequel or a epilouge will come that might involve the other members of the Lagoon Company. A sequel that might not be necessary an action one, just be about Rock and Revy living their new peaceful lives as restaurant owners.

You really had me in the first half there chief

Stripping maybe

Wouldn't Revy still have warrants for her arrest in New York

Love Love Love this

I loved Revy and Rock's interactions, the story was overall magnificent and emotional, thanks for the emotional Rollercoaster!

Calling a woman beautiful is not a magic spell. Try that on Balalaika buddy, she'll laugh and shoot you in the face. You're trying to tame Revy in this chapter and I don't really see it working.

very good but the ending frightened me a bit. i thought revy died.

i know this story is old an all but loved it but i almost had a heart attack when i thought revy died

You scared the fuck out of me ;(

I found this recommended on TvTropes, and it's worthy of it. Well done. The interactions are spot on! That line in chapter 1 with Revy pimping herself out still gets me.

Dude great job with these fan fictions I just read your other one on bl he friends with benifites it was good

In my opinion, there's no fucking way Revy would go back to prostitution, and no way Rock would allow her to go back to prostitution. That kind of killed this for me.

Damn.. that was one awesome story! I need to commend you for that! Thanks for writing such a good story!

Supergoddad

Honestly this fic is flippin amazing. I know its been out for a while now but i owe you a review since your work and the works of other countless talented writers such as yourself is what inspired me to start writing my own stories.

Usualy when i review things i look at the key positive aspects and negative ones but i wount to it for this fic. Instead il describe how it made me feel.

For lack of a better term this fic made me feel happy. I remember reading this a while ago and i couldnt stop until i got to the end of it. The whole fic had me interested from start to finish
. this is just one of those peices of literature that captures the magic of reading. Personaly i hate reading but you fic makes me want yo read. I cant say enough positive things about tjis fic so il sum it up in 1 word PERFECTION.