| Reviews for Cherry Blossom Flash |
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   HeartOfAServant chapter 4 . 7/19/2019 I lasted this much. I don’t think Sakura will open that much of her life to a person she met few hours ago. Not to mention breakdown in tears to almost fall in the ground bec of it. Not much of an anbu medic dont you think? |
| ERZA DREYAR chapter 18 . 4/27/2019 pls update soon |
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/14/2018 Rut ro raggy |
| JyuneFuma chapter 18 . 9/6/2017 please update soon |
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/23/2016 "She stood up, slightly shaky. So Minato held her arm ready to catch her if she fell." - this part your kind of implying that she is weak after she got cut and healed herself. I thought she was an ANBU Captain and Medic? Shouldn't she be used to stuff much more worse than that? Advice, think before you write/type. And also its a bit unrealistic - your fanfic I mean. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/23/2016 Your fanfic is emotional in a bad way |
| Inkkunee chapter 5 . 5/16/2016 I'm sorry I have to stop reading. At least for a while. All these different point of views have me confused. Switches between first person and third person views are annoying. I think your multiple POVs might have worked better if you had decided to stick with just one of them. Now the logic of switching between first and third person is just lost on me. In future stories make a choice to write in first/third person view, and if you feel the need to change the view to first/second/third, then do it as a literary device to emphasize something. But usually stick to one you chose at the beginning. I made it to chapter 5, and after a while I will continue reading. I like your story, it's just exhausting to read (because of povs and views and so on). Your writing and way to express things is nice, so I'm not saying your story sucks or that you can't write, just that there's always room to be better. |
| LinMM chapter 18 . 3/19/2016 Keep going please! |
| Hithere chapter 18 . 10/11/2015 Please too many ppl for Samura make less |
| Pink ranger 13 chapter 18 . 10/10/2015 It's a great story |
| Guest chapter 17 . 7/11/2015 YOU BETTER UPDATE! DONT LET ME HANGING! |
| Kira Kage 66 chapter 17 . 7/9/2015 Ahhhh please update soon I will tell u how amazing your story is once its completed Im not really being mean or anything I just really wanna say when its done The story is awesome so far Cause this story is the second Minato and Sakura fanfiction I have ever read so yeah I really wish for this to be completed Thanks for the chapters so far Thanks |
| Guest chapter 17 . 6/7/2015 You keep on changing POV and its annoying that I ended skipping to the last chapter (althought I did read up to chapter 8) |
| Rei chapter 9 . 5/21/2015 too much OC... ugh, I think I have a Headache |
| Guest chapter 17 . 10/15/2014 I tiredly love this story, please update soon! |
