| Reviews for The Deal |
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  Milla chapter 18 . 3/21/2019 Please finish the story I know it's hard... procrastination...But please at least a resume of how it ended |
 prettyprettyflowers chapter 1 . 8/11/2017 I couldn't put this story down, I just had to keep reading! You mentioned you knew how the story would end already. I'd love nothing more than to find out what happens! I love your style and the dynamic between the characters. This alternate universe is fascinating and I can't get enough of it! |
| Bulgeta chapter 18 . 3/10/2017 please please please Finish the story! too good to just not complete _ |
| bellamadet chapter 18 . 2/5/2017 It says on the page that this story was update in 2015. :( My heart broke thinking that I might never get to know the ending of your story..huhuhuhuh.. Are you still going to continue this? :( |
| bellamadet chapter 2 . 2/2/2017 I have read almost all of the DBZ stories you posted here and I must say that I really love your writing style. The way you write, to me it really is impressive. |
| MarcellaDuchamp chapter 18 . 9/19/2016 Now that they are finally planetside, things are getting exciting! I've never read a fic with an innocent, reclusive Bulma before; that's an interesting twist especially considering her and Vegeta's relationship. Hope you update! |
| Chibi chapter 18 . 6/16/2016 Please tell me there will be an update soon this is amazing |
| Debrwxn tr wavb chapter 18 . 5/1/2016 You left with a really big cliff hanger. Whyyyyyyyy must you do this?! Please update soon. |
| khalidalkhansa chapter 18 . 4/23/2016 What an awesome story! I hope you have a chance to update soon. |
| sakura moon chapter 18 . 2/1/2016 It's a great story I think...why did you stop writing? Plz finish the story...I'm dying to know what will happen in the end of story...plz overcome your problem or writer block and give us a nice flowing of story which can give me a nice feeling in the you write for it,plz? |
| fangurlsrule chapter 18 . 10/5/2015 Oooh bulma is going to be in so much trouble! Vegeta is already pissed, now he is going to be furious! |
| sam chapter 18 . 10/4/2015 I love this story please keep writing until its finished it is great! I love the storyline and the relationship building between vegeta and bulma. Great writing keep it up! :-) |
| Elspeth chapter 18 . 10/2/2015 No you can't end it here...OMG! |
| Spellweaver10 chapter 18 . 9/8/2015 how could you stop there? Update update update |
| Future chapter 18 . 9/6/2015 Love this story. Has me giggling the whole time. Cant |
