Oh gosh, this was beautiful. This was stunning! How did you do the TARDIS so well?! It was so loosely related, so rambly that it might have made no sense at all except that it DID, it was entirely the TARDIS and the sheer oddness of the situation and the Doctor and how important he was and how important and unsettling everything was and that bizarre perception that isn't used to FEELING this way, properly, with a body. Haha, of course I would have adored a reference to River being her child (hey, only water in the forest!) but it didn't fit that well here because River wasn't in the ep (I wish). It was wonderful. Beautiful. It was perfection and talent and grace :)

This is absolutely perfect in every way. Idris/TARDIS was completely in character, and it's heartbreaking to get inside her head like this, knowing what's going to happen.

I love Idris stories, and this one was right on in characterization

Wow, you really got the all-over-the-placeness of Idris's character.

And I'm loving all the hints and quotes from the episode, and the shifting tenses.

Wondeful.

G~

this was incredible. i loved your take on the TARDIS' thoughts.