Great story that I enjoyed reading,
Story has plenty of action and suspense and some romance.
Hopefully you pick up on this story in a different one.

that was good keep the chapters coming

I tottally enjoy this story. why can't Kishimoto made this arc like the way you made this? Hinata really shone here. all complete package with her insecurities, her self doubtness, her resolve and determination, and with a correct push, she shwed her fighting skill. nicely done. And eventough I don't quite like politics, i really like how you portraid the consequences of being a noble clan, and the interactions between the clans, and between their Hokage. you really showed why Sandaime was called the profesor, calm, but able to control those who were his citizens. the conversation between him and Hiashi was done wonderfully. The turnmoil inside Hyuga clan also pictured nicely. not to forget how you developed our hero: Naruto and Sasuke, in their so in character way. Sakura still looked immature by the end of this chapter, but perhaps in the next story, she will also develop?
great job!

wow

I love this story!
It was very cute, and your sense of humor cracked me up many times.
There were a few things I didn't especially like, for instance some of your descriptions were a bit much, like borderline inappropriate, but that is a personal preference.
Overall, I love the story and am looking forward to reading the next one in this serious.
Good job!

I never know how to feel about Sasuke. There are some moments where I start liking him but then he just turns back into to an arrogant little prick.

Sooo cute and creative! I can't wait to read the next arc! :D

Just so you know, as much as I'm enjoying this very well written and thought out story very much so far, the repeated use of Japanese/English mix of words is making me rage to the point of flipping my table over... despite the fact it is very much attached to my wall. Aside from that, stupendous work so far! I look forward to the rest! I just hope I can get through it with my sanity in check!

Mistress.

It's time you take a break. You and your companion.

This story has reached a point where...high,is not high enough,low,is too low.

Secrets that should've been known,aren't,and now,our team of 3 will face new challenges that will surely test them beyond what was thought possible.

Sincerely,

Neon and the Lost Soul.

O_o who speaks this blasphemy?!

This story is not garbage and will never be!

Mistress-sama,please ignore this blatant act of disrespect. For it is not necessary to listen to their misguided words.

Justice.

The sole thing that pushes humanity to several great extremes.

It can be twisted. Warped.

Yet used for good.

But good is only something that you'd find in a fanfic such as this one.

Good,used to be the norm.

Now its bad.

ANGER! RAGE! HATRED!

ALL THESE EMOTIONS AND MORS!

Yet,in the end we are all human.

So,in our quest to quell our own hatred,we create more.

Finally...the dark power within him awakens...

The Inner Demon Awakens.

The Kyuubi no Yoko.

(a.k.a. Kuruma the Fox.)

You know Mistress...i have to hand it to you.

YOU...are the most unpredictable writer I've ever come across.

The Hyuuga Affair? Bloody mental.

This story is proving to be more epic than the word epic itself. It's just...of all the things you didn't tweak...im very disappointed that Naruto is still such a...idiot...he has the potential to be a genius,yet very few people pick up on that.

Finally. Mistress.

You have given Hinata what no one gives her anymore.

Existence. Soul. Emotions. A real Life. Reasons. Love. Pain. Fear.

You've made her...Human.