please update, it's brilliant

God, I can’t wait to see what happens next!

I love this! This story is my absolute favorite transformer fanfic. You have an amazing ability to bring multiple characters to life that I have rarely seen anywhere. Even in published books. My only issue is waiting for the next chapter. Thank you for publishing this story.

I don't think I can understand much of this story without finishing it. So, will you be updating it this year?

This was a very interesting chapter considering what happened at the last one... Sam going through a panic attack always gets me every time and this Killstrike guy is interesting. Magnesia going whole mama bear is endearing too. I wonder what Soundwave is thinking throughout this whole ordeal. Oh and I wonder what Killstrike is going to do to get Sam/Altor controlled so he can be fixed. I guess I have to wait till the next chapter... good luck in writing the next ones! Thank you for writing this story too uwu

I absolutely adore the premise and first couple of chapters but I found the fragmentation of the majority of the chapters really hard to follow. It might just be me but I honestly got lost reading this. It feels like you have really big plans for this and are integrating sub plots in with the main plot. But in a way that makes it seem over encumbered with plot and lacking the detail to fully flesh out what you're trying to portray to us. I'm not trying to be harsh but I really did lose sight of where the story was going with all the changes in perspective.

Are you ever going to finish this story

absolutely amazing love the story and idea keep up the great work

Read it all in two days. It's such a fragmented story, with so many points of view, yet it flows seamlessly and traps your attention. 'Tis an amazing piece of art, and it's nOT FINISHED! Nevertheless, thank you for your writing. I hope it'll be updated soon!

This is awesome! I love the way Sam struggles with being cybertronian: it really sets our species apart. The journey to Praxus is very amusing. And using an ancient, one-of-a-kind artefact as a personal warning system? Ingenious!
Love it.

That's it? You stop right here?!
Why? Writter? Whyyyyyy?!

Please continue this as this is making my day

Lovely !

ya know...i began to worry when will this fanfic will updated"sigh"
Oh primus...soundwave's so cute...
Gahhh...i'm gonna die while waitting for this to updated...omg writter, where are uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu?

Omg! I love this story!