Reviews for Harry Potter and the Veil
Stepheniebates chapter 13 . 7/18
Please write more of this story it has me really interested
jmw03u chapter 13 . 12/10/2019
This is a really great story. I really like Harry's bond with Severus. They clearly have a friendship while still keeping some of that Snark. I also like that Harry seems mature, but he still seems like Harry. Thank you for writing this.
PrincessMagic chapter 13 . 11/2/2019
Wow wow wow! Absolutely loved this!
gcnhfgjfgtj chapter 13 . 6/19/2019
great story,thanks. can't wait for more ;) please continue
PunkMuggle chapter 13 . 2/13/2019
This fic is so. freaking. good! I'm a sucker for good ol' time travel fics, and this is such an amazing fic!
Guest chapter 13 . 11/14/2018
Love this! Can’t wait for the next chapter!
sylwioszek chapter 13 . 10/5/2018
I was re-reading this awesome fic, and Luna in this chapter got me thinking. Would she see Time Tigglers around Hermione too? Or maybe it would be some other variant of these creatures, because Hermione only time-traveled thanks to Time Turner (there were physically two or so Hermiones [and once Harry] at a time in their third year), whereas Harry also traveled into his younger body.

I love the friendship Harry and Severus have in this fic. The gift exchange was brilliant. Did using the Resurrection Stone make Severus lighter on the heart, give him closure? I really hope so.

Draco, too, was fun to read :D It's good he's coming around.

Hope You are doing alright! :D

Best wishes~! :D
Sylwioszek
Trainer Fiona chapter 1 . 9/7/2018
Ok, don't take this the wrong way, but you are a very irritating person.
Not irritating as in, 'You write shitty stories' irritating, but 'You write amazing stories that leave me at the end of my seat, and make me super excited and nervous at the same time, AND leave cliffhangers!'
Clearly you are the most irritating person in the whole world.

...Just kidding. You are an amazing writer with and amazing writing style and an amazing plethora of story ideas. It's truly awe-inspiring.
atemu1993 chapter 13 . 8/10/2018
Since I am one of the biggest Harry Potter fans and also a stickler for details, I thought that I should inform you of a tiny mistake in your story. You said that Harry gave Draco the Hungarian Ridgeback model from the dirt task for Christmas. I am sorry to say that there is no such dragon. The Norwigien Ridgeback is from Sorcerer’s Stone. The Hungarian Horntail is from the first task. Thank you for a great story regardless.
brush chapter 13 . 5/16/2018
yo how are those new chapters coming along ? ;))))
InTheShadows3 chapter 13 . 1/25/2018
Oh no! Why did you stop? I love this story and it's the best time travel fabric that I've read! Please update!
Lurker chapter 13 . 1/13/2018
Very well done! I'm happy to hear you don't plan on giving up on this story, and I look forward to any future updates, whenever they may be. (I'm also glad to hear there won't be much romance in this fic, as I tend to prefer gen.)
Hope life is going well for you!
Lurker chapter 9 . 1/13/2018
Haha, Harry's reaction to Rita Skeeter's question about parents...
the real narnia chapter 13 . 1/2/2018
well I finally caught up. a bit surprised Harry didn't just take Sev down to the chamber on Christmas, too.
this is magnificent, and I love the way it's unfolding. I hope you update soon, and I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Keylin chapter 13 . 12/8/2017
I love this story.
Love it.

I love the mentor/student war buddy good friend (whatever you call it) relationship between Snape and Potter. Pity Snape died in the books, the aftermath would've be interesting.

I think you portrayed very accurate, er, personalities, or mood or whatever of Snape and Granger and Weasley and Kreacher and Dobby and The Dark Dolt and Draco and pretty much everyone. It's nice how Snape isn't waaaaay to trusting, or waaaaay to snarky, he's just...the normal temp porridge, or whatever.

I was wondering why Dumbledore isn't suspicious though, that his precious Golden Boy wasn't okay and he was acting weird or something.
(Chillax, I'm not a Dumbledore hater but he is a little manipulative don't you think but I also think he is a generally good nice person and I think he honestly cared about Potter and his well being)

I like that you don't immediately have Potter and Weasely in a relationship, the mental difference always bothered me in other fanfics.

I like (well this is getting repetitive) the flashbacks, they provide much more information about Potter's past life and make things easier to understand.

BTW, Sorry for the looooooooooooooong review.

~keylin
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