Just one small error the land of snow / spring is over by the village hidden in clouds not the sand village totally in the opposite end of the country

HEY I have a question does anyone have any fanfiction where Sasuke and by extension the Uchida is not treated as the worst thing to cross the face of the Earth

xD "Belt-jutsu" - the most OP jutsu ever hahahaha awesome, i just cant stop laughing xD hahahah

I really like the story so far, Makoto is turning dark eatch moment, cant wait for "Finals fights". Naruto is comming back to the leaf, will it burn ? hahahah. I cant wait for the next chapter. Please dont abbondon this story.

When is the next chapter coming up text me at 5304417752 cause im hooked up on this story and wish to read more about it.

if I had 20 bucks for every time the word whore was used

No this story is too good to be abandoned

interesting belt justu interesting. good chapter.

This is so fucking good

Sasuke needs to seriously die right now, I don't care if he's a favorite in other Fanfictions or in the series, he seriously just needs to die in this fanfiction he is just an egotistical masochistic bastard.

Well the story is fun but I wish it will continue

Cool loved the story I will definitely put it on my recommendations, please, please continue I want to see how it goes and hope that mans plan to get Hinata fail.

I really hope you will update soon I know life can be hectic for authors but I don't want the story to die.

I want Makoto to live and get out of the darkness but I will be fine if he doesn't.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

I think you should made Hinata eyes the same as Naruto or just added pupils I hope you return Hinata eye color to normal after they get spring.

Love it I like how you are not sugar coating Sasuke I like him but he is an ass and if it wasn't for Naruto he would of turned out exactly or worse like you did him.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

That was amazing I can't wait to see more I love how you made Naruto prepared to do what ever it takes to protect the one he loves.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

Really good story. Five stars. I read it 6 times already