This is literally my favourite fanfic ever.
I'm not sure if you use this account any more but I'd love it if you wrote more stories with Amy Rory and 11 there the best!

I still wish Rory and the Doctor had talked a bit more about Rory's anger with him. I am glad he and Amy are good but he and the Doctor need at least one conversation.

Nice job tying up the pf loose ends.

Yes, the truth comes out! I wish that had happened in the show. I like how the conflict was resolved, dang tech malfunctions.

Wow, surprise there. Worked about as well as most of the Doctor's plans lol

Wow, this filter is a tough thing to beat.

I like Noora, she's tough and resourceful.

Good filler before the plan is in motion

While the Doctor does lie and say things people need to hear, he can also say what he observes and he was right about Rory. It's cool that he needs Rory's help too.

See, Rory is hard on himself, it just took practice for the telepathy skills to work. I am glad he reached out to help the others.

At least Rory doesn't want to hurt people, the shame is a good sign. Of course he would run away too. Nice job of the characterizations and responses

Glad Rory was able to calm himself enough to help the Doctor and admit their friendship. He does have questions that need to be addressed but the Dream Lord's manipulations (both in Amy's head and the doctor's should have cleared up that the Doctor wants Rory and Amy together)

Seems like Rory has been infected with the madness too. The half information is good for suspense and mystery.

The women did have a smart if frustrating plan. I hope Rory gets a chance to shine during the rescue

Interesting, the disease was a cool idea. Makes sense the village needs a Doctor and why they stared at Rory