Reviews for The Walk |
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Kyuubi323 chapter 10 . 7/28 Hi! Don't worry about taking too long to get a new chapter out. You update tgis in Dec, but it took me till now to get the chance to read it xD I can wait patiently for the next chapter too, not a problem! Stay safe and healthy! |
ZacckFairy chapter 10 . 6/14 Heeeeeyyyyy! Been a while! 2019/2020 is my graduating year so I got really busy and forgot to read the update. BUT I REMEMBERED RECENTLY AND I MADE SURE TO SAVOUR THE CHAPTER Honestly I feel like everything in this chapter is carefully written and crafted. I was hanging off every word as I read and I was so captivated. I can seriously feel the tension and the relief when the tension dissolves. I love the character dynamics and how they deal with each other. It FEELS like the characters themselves are being careful and crafting their sentences and actions carefully. I LOVE YOUR PACING. The story isn't rushed and not frustratingly slow. The actions and scenarios that happen make sense and I don't feel like they happened just for the sake of drama. They happened because of the characters acting like themselves. WHICH BRINGS ME TO YOUR AWESOME CHARACTERIZATION Bruuuuuuuuuhhh Seriously your characterization really makes the whole fic so amazing (and your other works of course). It honestly brings me so much satisfaction to read this chapter after I was left hanging in the last one. The way you weave the story and how it captures me is amazing so thank you so much! THANK YOU FOR WRITING I REALLY APPRECIATE IT. Seriously thank you so much for continuing to write and I look forward to your future works! I'm very excited about The Walk and The Outsiders and any other future works you may bring out! As always, thank you for the update and have a wonderful existance 3 |
From Atlantis with love chapter 10 . 5/14 The characterization. The dialogues. How you depicted the tension between Lenalee and Allen. You make my heart flutter with this story |
olivia.rodriguez.927 chapter 10 . 4/30 Love this please update~ |
Nella chapter 10 . 4/1 I really like your fan fiction. Truth. It's so cozy and cute, even though this Chapter "fed me glass" lol, I really like it. I hope that inspiration will not leave you and you will be able to create this masterpiece further. Thank you. |
Shadow Spears chapter 10 . 1/23 Oof! UPDATE SOON! |
None chapter 10 . 1/21 I hate how lena trying to middle in their relationship she makes everything about Kanda she’s so obsessed, poor Allen has to deal with her every time |
juliamlinaric.as chapter 10 . 12/25/2019 Pls update! |
juliamlinaric.as chapter 9 . 12/25/2019 Ok, all is coming together |
juliamlinaric.as chapter 8 . 12/25/2019 I just... damn |
juliamlinaric.as chapter 7 . 12/25/2019 Poor Allen doesn't know its love! |
juliamlinaric.as chapter 6 . 12/25/2019 Allen is really cute! |
juliamlinaric.as chapter 5 . 12/25/2019 When do they get together, damnit?! |
juliamlinaric.as chapter 4 . 12/25/2019 Oh boy! |
juliamlinaric.as chapter 2 . 12/25/2019 Wonder if there will be drama |