Reviews for Element master
robert krause chapter 2 . 7/3
when get money now and save up now when into the boxes room Naruto get a big super size box #56b and when put the money away now , save up to one to used when it was time too, he had put in the box death mask of the men he kill off , when too was dagger too when get the men green vest too, when now home now put the key away now, when took out some big time mob boss and get his money too when put it away too , when took out his army of thugs out and sold them swords and others stuff too, Naruto put the money away too , when get back home now he living in his bed room now the sun lights house with it was 5 bed rooms and office on the 1 floor now , when put his team pic on the backside now, he and 7 team , when get to sleeping now in the office was why his gril had seeing with why not just like her doing too,
chirs chapter 18 . 5/25
great and funny story
Smartyul chapter 18 . 5/15
Just finished reading. I didn’t really understand the point of Gin, but good story overall.
Natsu-Dragneel 210803 chapter 9 . 4/16
your omake is the funniest I've read in a long time
Vinyr chapter 1 . 4/14
So... Its Pokemon now? Cool! (ノω)ノ
robert krause chapter 2 . 3/13
when Naruto get the pay for the job and then find blood money of 100980-099 to gold as well ,he then put it away for when saving up to one day to buy out a house he find back away form his mom and dad house /vaillge , a 2 floor house red and green and blue too , when get to buy out it he put into some home office and men cave bed room and bar too, on the 1 floor and on the 2 is Naruto keep a books room full of books to looking into , when the wood shop is in the back now , when a ship Naruto own now , he be working on it now, when not doing ninjas stuff or doing body huther stuff , get to working now, when the shop is up and running now,
robert krause chapter 18 . 11/17/2019
why not doing with star fox and Naruto when Naruto took out star wolf and kill off fox and he had fox wife as his wife now ,and then he made a new whirlpool and he had a star fleet too ,
robert krause chapter 17 . 11/17/2019
when Naruto took out Tobi he then took off the men mask and he seeing him now my dad lost ninja suter and the one who kill them now , when made a dather mask now and put it on the wall now , as a he like to keep the vaillge to kwon of the men who made the fox go nuts and kill off the ninjas clans and others for power and he had Itachi evil clan blood money be put to a wall of the fall ones and names on it now ,
robert krause chapter 16 . 11/17/2019
when Naruto and his wife 1 and 2 had get owner ship of a bar king and queens ninjas warriors and made money form it too , when on the wall is rings of the Akatsuki and old long capes too ,when in time the bar is sill own by them too , when on the top floor Naruto keep his body huther co fox cat and bugs nights co , with 4 offices in the now and one cub city used by his tame one duther and son and his twin sister now and a dog name lob when into it now , on the wall is more bad guys and woman like be took out and kill off too , sound and others parts too even the west now,
robert krause chapter 2 . 11/17/2019
when then get the money form the body pay roll office and used the money for some stuff Naruto be working with when took his mom and dad house now ,a men cave office and bed room now , a others house he get made a former tool shop into a new house a 4 bed room house /5 bed room a stay office and reading room full of books ninjas stuff and some scrolls maps no the wall , art too , like woman and hot grils with big muslces and bobs too , when Naruto had used this more then 90 times over then his dad old office and it is his own now even light green walls now, when in the room is super size bed too for sleeping and boy he had sleeping in it too, when a map of the red lights map on the wall ,
Guest chapter 1 . 9/14/2019
The 3rd hokage is kinda Stuipd If Naruto Was Beaten the first time he should call Anbu But No He the civilian Bitch.
Naruto Should never call The 3rd Hokage Jijj
fluttershywinde chapter 18 . 8/19/2019
Damn good story
robert krause chapter 2 . 7/13/2019
why not doing with the job Naruto had doing it when he get the now kill off mob boss and his goon army had be on the boay huthers lit s to a class bad guys and he get both the money form the mob boss co money and the goons too and used it to made some new homes on his mom and dad lands and he put into a new cub offices to used as will and a up floor men cave bed room and art /books room and hot grils and woman dolls and toys too ,like dc and x men and others grils too , as for his wall it is full of swords and others daggers and wehops too , sir i Robert Krause was trying to not sammping you for the working you doing here for Naruto , 2 i am a Naruto fan sir and my little pony too ,
linkiepie2214 chapter 18 . 5/26/2019
This was a fun read, if you have not yet made a squale to this awsome story about how thier kids do shit.
linkiepie2214 chapter 9 . 5/25/2019
I loved the Omake: Alternate Gaara fight, that was funny as all hell and the finals fights were fun to read.
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