I really liked the story.
Keep on writing stories like this, okay?
You are a good writer.
Just tell me where do you live.I'll show my thing, okay?
bye.***

Outstanding

More Tyhil fanfics please like this one I need more Tyhil fan fictions like Hilary and Tyson being all cute and flirty with each other and where they end up together I need to see them in a romantic setting please please MORE TYHIL

Oh my! I just LOVEDDDDD this fic!
I was in dire crave of reading a tyhil lemon fic and ,this was soooooo beautiful and sweetest lemon I've ever read! I actually faved it! :"D
So happy to read it a :)))

I loved this fanfic . Plz do update some more

This story is so lovely! It's rare to find TyHil smut and you wrote it beautifully! It's so warm and cute, well done :) I'd love to read more TyHil from you. Keep up the great work!

Best part the ending.

Pardon me since I'm typing this on my phone so autocorrect may screw a few of the words up.

I really, gratefully appreciated this fic as I always do with those that validate those characters that certain hardcore fans might deem unimportant, or even a nuisance.

Hillary has always been a favorite of mine
(along with a certain supporting female character from Pokemon, who has a lot in common with Hilary personality-wise). Plus I love Tyson/Hil and practically nailed them here, making me gush all sorts of fangirl-y mush on my phone... Don't worry, I cleaned up first before reviewing this, I promise!

Anyway, lesmexyness was great, enough to satisfy the readers but also dropping back enough to convey the characters' emotions... And the confessions were flawless.

*sigh* What is wrong with me supporting couples wherein the male character only has that one strictly dream-like, unromantic goal on the brain and absolutely nothing else...?

Oh well, this was enough for me for now. :)

Happy writing!

Dude, this was AWESOME! You definitely need to make a sequel! Show the teams reactions, or make Kai jealous and long after Hilary. Anything, just make a Sequel to this thing, because this was AWESOME!

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Pleas continue this. I know its a one shot, but I think you could do something with it.

You were worried about this being a bad fic? Lol.
This is perhaps the best M-rated Ty-Hil fic on this website. Trust me, all the characters were very much in character. And I can visualize the Ty-Hil interaction happening exactly the way you wrote it. Kudos to you for a great M-rated Ty-Hil fic.
On the negative side, the lemon was a bit rushed. I have read many lemon fics and since this was already an M-rated fic, you might as well have written a better and more passionate lemon (with some graphic description, perhaps).
Apart from that, nice fic overall. Please keep up the good work and hopefully give us more great Ty-Hil fics!

i loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove this story so much. brilliant stuff! please continue if u can *begs on both knees*

This story was so fliping awesome! Great job I hope to see more beyblade storys from you. :)

Do you take beyblade story request?

Do you think this is bad? God this was good! PRETTY GOOD!
Yeah... Maybe the "sex" part was a little rush... But Damn...
It was a good fic. And I liked.

So... Good Stuff!

Saludos de México!