noooo finish it pls

BEST CHAPTER YET

this just keeps getting better and better also i didnt like the dream about hanabi my only complaint mostly cause im a hyuga tard XD plus i wrote a fanfic about her (not in this site) it was about my oc mizu and other but im done rambaling,

man you are ahead of your time, Naruto saying 'I don't feels so good' reminds me of Spiderman but then i see it was made at 2012.

continualo eso konoha perdera aldeanos jajajaja por favor sigue esta increible esta historia.

Man I love dark naruto ,and I love naruhina . Your story is really good, I hope you update soon. Tho I still love naruto’s good side, I always felt that his friends and the village took advantage of him, I mean really I know smacking naruto is supposed to be for laughs in the anime, but if he started smacking Sakura or Tsuande around then it wouldn’t be so funny. And not only that but no one ever told him about his parents or what he had inside him, he found that out on his own. So yes I love reading dark naruto fanfics because to see him snap and hate his village is something that no one will ever suspect, and it’s so thrilling to read how everyone thinks they know him when he has carried so much on his shoulders, that he just snaps. And hinata being apart of it and loving him so much that she would also go against everyone for naruto , is the cherry on top:)

And abandoned just when it gets good.
I do hope author-san continues this soon. You too muse.

I agree with the chapter entirely about the manipulation of hiruzen, jiraya, stupidity of kakashi, some part tsunade please post more

this is really well done. you should really update because it is really good. and its a big cliff hanger, i wanna see what happens because its really good.

I realy línea the store, it is unique, has a awsome plot, and contains one of my favorite ships "Naruhina!", so i realy wish you luck for the rest of the story and i hope to see more about this piece of art that you have here!

Wish you my best of wishes, Pabs.

Interesting story BUT I have to agree with some other reviewers and say that most of this wouldn't logically happen

Please keep going. I'd love to see how this all turns out.

Come on please update, things have just gotten spicy (is it bad that I want them both to stay evil and have a happy ending)

Ok, really loving this story. I just have one critique. The ending bit, with them just...casually murdering a citizen, and not reacting beyond a mild thought. It feels too far, too fast. I could see it leading to this state of emotions in both, but I feel like it went from "Being willing to hurt people" to "outright slaughter of civilians" too quickly. Other than that, very much waiting for an update. I quite like your style.

Honestly, one of the shittiest writing style i've ever read, i hate it when writers throw away all sense of logic or justification when conveying their ideas, it makes it unimaginative and utterly boring. You wrote that hundreds of civilians disappeared and gain the attention of the fire daimyo such that he specifically requested konoha to obtain and explaintion, yet you send naruto who i might add was a genin regardless of his skill level ALONE to survey or do intelligence gathering(Which by the way is one of his worst skill judging from his personality and abilities). Surely the hokage, tsunade, would have thought of sending more people or more competent personal considering that a couple of HUNDREDs of people already disappeared. Even if all that was plausible, tsunade didn't feel any guilt or regret during the entire two weeks naruto was gone or when she found out he was torture/experiment upon? Especially when she thought of him like or son or a brother. Then comes the actualy experiments, a mad scientist with no shinobi training or skills manages to completely cut of naruto's connection to kyuubi even when seal masters like minato and the uzumakis couldn't, in what world is that even plausible? You add everything up and this becomes a story that is plain stupid, just poor writing at its core as you failed to justify your concept for the stories even a little