I kinda wanted to see a lemon sometime soon...

The ninjas in the story seemed like soldiers though, the way they communicate while in a mission, the way they used weapons instead of ninjutsu, it's fine though, but it should be more of a ninja like story.

I've read many fanfiction about Naruto, what I like in this story is how they worked well on character development, harem between naruto and hinata of course hahaha, and the way that I get emotional on some parts of this story.

What's lacking in this story ia how a ninja would fight in a mission just like in the Manga AND its' SLOW UPDATE

I'm confused uggh! I thought Sai was dealing with zetsu and was on a critical conditon as he was hurt and unable to contact others which was all from the last chapter, and now from this chpater, Sai is with his team -.I don't know anymore! It didn't even mentioned if they made clones of themselves or maybe the white zetsus cloned them and their chakra signatures. It's a good story though! But it got complicated on chapters 41 and 42

But reading the whole chapter things gets clearer than before. However, it should have been more detailed in chapter 41 cause it would be a domino effect and will confuse the readers on the upcoming chapters

this is literally the most cringey thing I've ever read. All naruto cares about are people who beat him, noone trusts him. He loses to everyone in this. Why would naruto start trusting kurama. Like kurama has done nothing yet to earn his trust. Naruto is just like ok if you say so. You do things just to add drama, there is no realistic reactions from any character.

Ok so im three chapters into your story. The power scaleing makes zero fucking sense. Naruto loses to two no name ninjas after beating pain. The six paths of pain are one of the strongest characters in the series. But two no names are better i guess. Droped.

Great build up it eas well worth it.

You ve done a wonderful job developing their relationship and furthermore gave Hinata a better character development then the mangaka ever did.

So are you gonna pull the whole "Madara is immortal" or will you stick to canon with Obito pretending to be him? I'm just a curious reader.

Essa história é Fantástica. Por favor continue.

The Ame arc so far has been really cool, but I'm kinda upset with how little Sasukes trial has been shown. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Whens the next one? I loved this story and found it better than the show itself and alot more thoughy out then even some of the other fanfics I read. Pls put out more

Bruh my guy said he was gonna drop the next chapter a month later and dipped. SMH, these fanfic writers are real ballsy. Dropping pieces of art and not finishing what they started. It’s high key Irritating when there is a good story and we don’t even get to see its completion.

Soooo... about that promise.

Just be sure during their sex scene they both question if they slept with anyone else where naruto hasn’t and Hinata didn’t as well although you never made it clear. Naruto implied her cherry was already popped but I’m mainly assuming it happened when she was masturbating. I’m probably overthinking it I just want to make sure they were both virgins and had their first time together.

If anyone can make it clear to me during chapter 50 after Hinata and naruto finish having sex they talk about if they ever done it with others naruto make it clear he hasn’t but then he implies that Hinata cherry was already popped. She never confirm but regardless I assume it happen during her masturbating. She has always thought of naruto since they were kids so obviously she would never do It with anyone else but I just wanted it to be more clear and her reassuring it.