What do you mean by “dark idiot?” Never heard this expression before and hope its meaning differ from its inference.

I love that they're running away together. Super romantic

I am so excited about this story. I have always thought that they should have met when they were older and more mature. I think this is going to be a lot of fun. I can already tell it's well written. EEEk so exciting :)

I find Padme arguments hard to believe. She decided to reject Anakin because she didn't want him distracted by her during the war ?
Think about it, who is more likely to come back alive from the frontline : the one who have someone who love him and is wainting for him back home ? Are the one who is heartbroken and has no one ?
Who is more likely to throw his life away but doing something reckless ?

Cute story!

Wow. This story is amazing, one of the best alternatives I've read. And your English is brilliant, I honestly forgot that English was not your first language until I read the bottom! This story engrossed me so much that I forgot!
Keep it up,
can't wait to know what's to happen next

Great spin on a new ending for Anakin and Padme while still fitting pieces of the original story. It was very entertaining!

WOW! I can't tell your not English with how it's written! It's amazing how well you can write English when it's not your first language! And you can count on Snips to catch your mistakes! That's good teamwork, and this is an AWESOME story!

You're fantastic. I could never write something in another language. I would never even dare try. Plus, it's a great something, and better than many things native speakers come up with. Lovely.

Whoa, I loved how he had to find out about the pregnancy and his reaction lol. I really like how you gave Obi-Wan time to defend himself, I agree with you that he wouldn't have turned Anakin into the Council.

Nice touch of humor after a battle scene. And points to Ahsoka for being so intuitive and observant

I really liked the banter between Obi-Wan and Anakin, brilliantly written. I also enjoyed the force touch that Anakin did, shows the depth of his love.

Their argument was very well written and fitting. I am glad they realized it's okay to have faults and fight, shows good character development from the last time.

I loved seeing the dynamic between Anakin and Ahsoka, great stuff. Obi-Wan is a wise one, ignorance is bliss sometimes with Anakin for sure.

I love the marriage proposal, so endearing and sweet. I liked seeing them as a couple, how they can accept the other as they are. The exchange of the droids was too cute and very fitting