The whole thought of minato betraying kushina and Naruto is bullshit and random, Minato was just as angry at the village as kushina when he arrived, yet he's suddenly a spineless coward now? Also if the soul king could issue those kinds of orders, ichigo would've died when he invaded the soul society and used hollow powers.

Great fic. I love it

This was a true piece of art

I like revenge fics. Im angry at minato, and even if it was unintentional he fu ked naruto's life. Personally i wouldn't have forgiven him. Why save people not worth saving rather than those who are worth saving? Wonder if there are fi s like that, where he saves good people like the ichiraku family and lets everyone else die. Anyways, it seemed that minato here wanted naruto to kill him. It seemed he deliberatly antagonized his son so naruto will kill him, like to repent for his sins. I wish we had that angle instead of minato being a loyal servant. That being said, we should have seen the shinigami king die and get replaced, cause he totally deserves to die for being a coward.
Overall, a very good revenge fic.

This was pretty good. While I will admit, I would have ended it differently, It's still great. besides, that's one of the great things about platforms like this, we can find so many different opinions and ideas. Another good story guy.

I haven't read anything yet, but seeing the comment under this, I couldn't help but think, don't you hate it when people are so scared to use an actual profile when they leave a non-legible flame? I personally find that annoying. It's fun to pick apart their 'reviews' and make fun of them. Being able to call them out on the bullshit is half the fun. Anyhow, I'll try to remember to leave an actual review after I finish the story. I have yet to read a story by you that I disliked so far, so I'm expecting great things.

Your pairings are shit. This looks like the writings of a wimp puff who watched his mother ride some crackhead's dick. Was he the same crackhead who stole your girl and fucked her in front of you? The same crackhead who bullied you? Bet your your cunt mother was hoping to get knocked up so the bastard spawn can replace you. I wouldn't be surprised if she prayed you dropped dead somehow. Hehehe

5 chaps and damn good story

J

Another Fantastic Story.

This was awesome I love it and the whole father betrays son thing was perfect although it could have been extended with them talking about what could have been before naruto killed him
the parings are the best I love itachi and harribel and grimmjaw with anko and shizune is hilarious although what happen to kushina you didn't say

god just got done watching the Stark vs Shunsui and felt like rereading this

Yayayayayayayayayayayayay!

Great fic love it hella even if it's just five chapters was freaking great.

This is one of the few stories despite it only having 5 chapters and a whole lot of words it is just funny to see naruto just destroy anyone who steps up to the plate