Reviews for Bodyguard of Azula |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Bruh the ending |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this chapter alot |
![]() ![]() ![]() Part of me wishes that naruto actually knocked bee out and possibly killed him for making naruto use kuramas chakra, you don’t force someone to do something without repercussions |
![]() ![]() ![]() Muy mediocre el inicio, destrozaste a Azula, a Naruto y toda la historia de ambos universos para satisfacer una fantasía personal, me sorprende que lleves tantos capítulos escribiendo esta basura. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story, but it REALLY pisses me off that you've had Naruto acting like an angsty punkbitch lashing out at people he's being to stubborn and aang-level stupid to actually give the time of day, like a spoiled fucking child. He's more relatable to canon sasuke except with a personality(but only with Konoha shinobi) and it's infuriating. I see why people say you've made him a Gary stu. |
![]() ![]() yo this is so CRONCH |
![]() ![]() ![]() there is so much literary genius in this fanfiction I'm actually shocked this is some good ass shit my guy |
![]() ![]() ![]() While I like the idea of the story, it needs work. If you’re quoting the show itself half the time, it’s not your story. All you’re doing is inserting Naruto into the story with no meaningful changes. Something as big as a major character being put into the story should have more profound changes than the occasional change in Azula’s attitude. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a beautiful memorial, and I think it shows how much Azula and Zuko have grown, and something I believe Jairo really really appreciate, and will remember for a long time. Also curious if Naruto will have some kind of fox sage mode. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn’t think stoning meant drugs, but now that you said that, I’m thinking of him being made to smoke a whole room full of marijuana LOL |
![]() ![]() ![]() Definitely another enjoyable chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Once again, definitely another enjoyable chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Definitely another very enjoyable chapter, I’m currently re-watching avatar right now LOL, on the last two discs. Next, is legend of Korra |
![]() ![]() ![]() Definitely another really great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Breathing lightning was an awesome addition. |