Reading this again, I realize I'm actually much more reserved in my enthusiasm.

"Oh gee, though Kakashi, I wonder why the kid ostracized by the whole village would not believe in spontaneously helping one another, something he has NEVER been shown."

This is basically how Kakashi's thoughts read to me this time. This man is an idiot, a massive idiot even.

Aww come on this is one epic cliffhanger
Wanna read more...
Well, maybe you will one day update this fic and I'm certainly looking forward to it

:D

Over a year later, and the author was to never be seen again-

Good idea, bad execution of it.

Well holy sh*t, I think this is one of the most powerful description of war I've read in this fandom. The sudden shift to Sakura was a bit jarring but on the end, it even added to the weight of this chapter.

This was a lesson and you gave a brilliant demonstration.

Best writing to you,

I'm so stupid, how did I never figure out why Naruto was the one tied up when Sakura did worse? Obviously, Kakashi knew that Naruto would have helped Sakura and Sakura would have helped Sasuke, therefore he had to use Naruto who would be the least likely to be helped

4 chapters in and your story literally has nothing. Where is the content? What skillz have you even given him?

You do know that you can easily just give him, his father's home and have him live there with all the jutsu and scrolls and seals right? Why do this roundabout bullshit that isn't even necessary?

across the great ocean of living lighting so small yet so defiant as to cross continents and oceans. i press a button and give my love.
this story is certainly an interesting one. and i hope you are better for writing just as i am better for reading it.

Good luck

i am quite enjoying this

i really enjoyed reading this! thank you for taking the time out of your day to write this. i hope you have a nice day.
love from me
xoxox

fucking shit

You know im suprised konoha survived without naruto. He took care of gaara when no one else was around, a tailed beast that could do monstrous damage. Im so glad sakura is suffering. She had so much potential but never acted upon it, fuck even towards the end of shippuden her strength doesnt do much. Anyways, hope most of the civilians are dead, cause fuck them, and the remaining ones are crushed when sasuke betrays them cause they deserve to suffer.

Just reread this, and it is wonderful, but this chapter at the same time is so sad, and reflects how many things had changed and been list by all of them with these changes

This story is dead isn’t it?