INteresting take on this. I wish that would be a deleted scene- just ho you wrote it. You know how to write in powerful, emotional words while in character. wow 3

Aww sweet, good work with the emotional stuff, it felt very right :)

I loved all of the emotion underlying the whole story. I would like to see your scenario play out on July 10. I want them back together, caring about eachother and their inevitable arguments. Great story.

Awww this was so cute! I absolutely loved it. Well done! : )

I really liked this story. It seemed realistic enough to believe in fanfiction universe. I liked all of the reflections they were both having and the interactions between the three seemed true to character. I would love to see Neal reconnecting with the others like, June, Sara, Elizabeth, and the other suits. :).

Liked this.

Aww! I liked this! Enjoyed getting into Neal and Peter's thoughts. Good job!

Blessings,

Fierce

I loved this! I liked the look at Peter's thoughts and Neal's too. I liked the way you came up with for Neal to send a message to Peter. Very him. I loved the hug at the end. I really want to see hug on the show. And of course Mozzie would travel with his Russian Surplus. :)

Lovely story.

Kim on the forum

Sweet and touching. Thanks.

well done. I hope we get something simliar (happy) when the show returns.

Loved that happy story.

JeanneZ84

Even if we don't see this one on TV...it was great. Loved the way you described both of Peter's and Neal's thoughts and I really loved it when they simply hugged each other (maybe we will see that on TV?). Thanks for sharing and I wouldn't mind a sequel to this ;-)

Great job!

This was great! I would love to see it happen just this way. (:

loved this story, touched my heart