Reviews for Rewritten |
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![]() ![]() Look I do not reread many stories; LoTR and HP. But I have reread this fanfic about six times and I enjoy it EVERY time. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did you even watch naruto at all or are you just randomizing the timeline? there are so many inconsistencies in your story that i can't keep up with them anymore. and why is mc going around revealing everything about the future to the most untrustworthy people he can find? i mean come on couldn't you just give him a name other than Naruto |
![]() ![]() ![]() why did you change your writting style for the last, longest, and shoring up story chapter? It makes no sense, all it does it throw you for a loop with a jaring ending, rather than a neat and tidy one |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter, good fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() gud chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chappter |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapterr |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting start |
![]() ![]() ![]() Umm, you do know that tobi is obito right? And Madara is to old to do anything. So who the fuck is this guy? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wanted to wait till I was done with the story... but its tooo good. Solid? This story is AMAZING! |
![]() ![]() If I could Kudos this, I would click without any resignations, I love kids epilogues! I his story was kick-ass hope you keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely loved everything up until chapter 17, the battle there felt a bit weak but your writing clearly wasn't focused around writing battles but instead excellent character development and interactions. And though I was sad to see there wasn't more interaction between Naruto and Mikoto in this chapter I can understand why. overall this was a really solid fix even if I wish it were longer. Mikoto is a very good choice in Waifu so I'll give this a solid 8.5-9/10 |
![]() ![]() ![]() An enjoyable read from start to finish. There were a couple spots where the story felt a little rushed, or like the explanation of time travel was carrying the plot almost too easily in the first couple chapters, but it was all together a wholly enjoyable story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Solid story. Thanks for sharing. |