Reviews for beyond the mirror's edge
raymond49090rc chapter 2 . 7/1
Somehow I think I liked this more than the actual movie. The characters actually did stuff other than be there for one-off jokes, and none of the meaning of the original plot was lost.
nightwind83 chapter 2 . 9/10/2017
this was really good
california poppyseed chapter 2 . 7/6/2015
I just want to frame this paragraph forever:
Naruto audibly cringes as the entire canvas of expression on the pinkette makes Yamato's Face of Unmentionable Doom comparable to that of a mewling kitten rolling with a ball of yarn. It should be considered an art form, the way Sakura's facial veins manage to form the kanji for 'kill'.

Like that is beautiful
Seriously the naruhina feels were PERFECT
your ways of describing stuff is perfect
JUST GOD ITS SO HILARIOUS AND
GO LITTLE JIRAIYA GOOOOOOO
california poppyseed chapter 1 . 7/6/2015
Oh.
My.
God.
This fic is beautiful
It really and truly is. Every sentence was the EMBODIMENT of hilariousness and sarcasm. Bishounen? The entire seppuku on the groin? GOD I COULD SPEND A YEAR QUOTING AND LAUGHING ABOUT THIS FIC.
But i felt like crying too at some points cuz of the feels.
You should feel proud of yourself.
Ayrmed chapter 2 . 5/10/2014
That was truly awesome!
Broken Elsewhere chapter 2 . 1/1/2014
I wish the movie had been like this, where the RtN versions weren't just one-off jokes. I love your interpretation of all the characters - although some of RtN Hinata's threats were a bit much. My favourite parts were where she felt she connected with the 'real' Hinata; they were very well-written and bittersweet. I also enjoyed the humour, and the ending was perfect.

Elsewhere
Phurya chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
*work. (left that out in the last sentence of my review)
Phurya chapter 2 . 6/13/2013
Excellent! Simply and utterly EXCELLENT work. I started out browsing through the piece and was caught; I had to go back and read it from the start, I just HAD to. From your portrayal of the characters (canon and AU), to your use or literary devices and the plot...Oh the plot was ... nothing short of BRILLIANT! This is the first story that I've read that has been written by you but i assure you it won't be the last.
I wish you well in your studies, I know studying can be a bastard (I'm a Univesirty student too), especially when there are so many good manga and fan-fictions to read, not to mention animes to watch...sorry probaly not helping, but focus when necessary and take a break sometimes you deserve it.
Thank you for a most enjoyable reading experience and keep up the good.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
I picture the first moment they see Sasuke and the only music that comes to mind is "I'm Sexy and I KNOW It"

I can only fall down and laugh till conniptions...
SJ chapter 2 . 5/31/2013
I have to say, I like this better than the actual movie, and not just because of the Naruhina. Frankly, you just plain do a better job here.
dayfox96 chapter 2 . 5/24/2013
sweet, bitter and beautiful
chibionigiri chapter 2 . 5/18/2013
Great fic, man
TenchiSaWaDa chapter 2 . 5/8/2013
Very beautiful!
KawaiPanda chapter 2 . 5/6/2013
Awee... So cute. :)
dragonball256 chapter 2 . 5/5/2013
Lol ok this was great. Might as well have been another chapter instead it was nice and long. Hoping you make more Naruto stories.
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